Idée Histoire ?

[Reenmau]

Bonsoir !

Je dois raconter une histoire ( assez longue ) qui doit être amusante et haletante, mais je n'ai aucune idée de sujet. Des propositions ?

Merci.

[Jean B]

Good evening,

Here's some help :

http://shortstoryideas.herb.me.uk/

http://www.creative-writing-now.com/short-story-ideas.html

http://www.daviddfriedman.com/Miscellaneous/story_ideas.htm

http://www.tumblr.com/tagged/short%20story%20ideas

When stuck, just ask google!

[Reenmau]

Merci, je vais donc faire quelques recherches et tenter de raconter une "histoire". :p

[Reenmau]

Bonjour !

Voilà mon histoire, pourriez-vous y jetter un coup d'oeil ?

Merci !

STUNNER.

Angie is 41 years old, she's 1m60 tall, with brown eyes and black hair. He she is generous and helpful but can be loud. At the airport, a stranger offers Angie money to carry a mysterious package onto the plane. The stranger assures Angie that it's nothing illegal and points out that it has already been through the security check. The woman has serious doubts, but needs the money, and therefore agrees...

Angie doesn’t have money because of a terrible evening meal. Angie's boss had invited her to dinner. Angie wanted to make a good impression, but she had a tendency to drink too much and say exactly what's on her mind... And the supper had badly turned. She had explained that she hate her job and getting a whiff of her boss. Angie’s boss was very angry, and had sacked the talkative woman.

This is the reason why she takes the plane. Although Angie is scared of flying. She had seen an advert for a new job. It’s away from her home but Angie is ready for anything. Here is the advert: I search a person who wants a Job.

She sits down near the window, the woman clenches the parcel between her hands. She is stressed, she shivers and sweats. One question torments her. “What am I going to do with that? “. The air hostess observes carefully the package. Happily the plane will be arriving in a few seconds.

The new job takes place in a little village in a farm; it's a nice and far place... It's perfect. Angie meets the advert’s man. Séba is 43 years old, with emerald green eyes and chestnut hair. He is creative and mysterious. He explains the new job. She has to give food to animals. In return, she’s room and full board.

After a long conversation with the charming man, Angie finds her new bedroom. The first thing that Angie notices when she enters in her room is that is very disorganized. There's no order. Everything has its place in the middle of chaos. To begin, the door lock is broken. The desk is long and narrow, and it has got many drawers. Above the desk there are a lot of things : a lamp, a mini cactus, many magazines, papers, pencils, pens ... On the other side of the wall there is a library full of books. Then there's her bed. It's metallic and black, nothing special. On the bed there are two very comfortable pillows. Beside the bed there's a bedside table with a lamp and many more things. But Angie has other things to think: the mysterious package! She hurries up and unwraps the parcel.

She can't believe what she is seeing. There is an egg! Angie hides her discovery below her bed and goes to sleep. She gets a load of questions. What there is inside this egg?

During the breakfast, Angie tells the story to Séba. Together, they decide to keep in a safe place the egg.

A few days later … The long-awaited egg begins to move. The shell breaks.

It was a great year for Angie, Séba and Marco. No, they hadn’t had a child even though Angie and Séba are a loving couple! Marco can fly and breathe fire or ice. He flies using large wings and his body is covered with scales. Marco has red and slanted eyes. He's kind and helpful. He possesses many different kinds of powers.

[Jean B]

A STUNNER.

Angie is 41 years old, she's 1m60 tall, with brown eyes and black hair. He She is generous and helpful but can be loud. At the airport, a stranger offers Angie money to carry a mysterious package onto the plane. The stranger assures Angie that it's nothing illegal and points out that it has already been through the security check. The woman has serious doubts, but needs the money, and therefore agrees...

Angie doesn’t have money because of a terrible evening meal. Angie's boss had invited her to dinner. Angie wanted to make a good impression, but she had a tendency to drink too much and say exactly what's on her mind... And the supper had turned out badly. She had explained that she hated her job and had got a whiff of her boss.<As-tu voulu dire que son patron sentait mauvais ? Angie’s boss was very angry, and had sacked the talkative woman.

This is the reason why she takes the plane. Although Angie is scared of flying. She had seen an advert for a new job. It’s away from her home but Angie is ready for anything. Here is the advert: I search am looking for a person who wants a Job.<search peut avoir le sens de fouiller au corps...

She sits down near the window, the woman clenches the parcel between her hands. She is stressed, she shivers and sweats. One question torments her. “What am I going to do with that? “. The air hostess observes carefully the package. Happily the plane will be arriving in a few seconds.

The new job takes place in a little village in a farm; it's a nice and far place... It's perfect. Angie meets the advert’s advert man. <génitif grammaticalement impossible Séba is 43 years old, with emerald green eyes and chestnut hair. He is creative and mysterious. He explains the new job. She has to give food to feed animals. In return, she’s given room and full board.

After a long conversation with the charming man, Angie finds her new bedroom. The first thing that Angie notices when she enters in her room is that it is very disorganized untidy / in a mess. There's no order. Yet, everything has is in its place in the middle of chaos. To begin, the door lock is broken. The desk is long and narrow, and it has got is fitted with many drawers. Above the desk there are a lot of things: a lamp, a mini cactus, many magazines, papers, pencils, pens ... On the other side of the wall there is a library bookcase full of books.<C'est le meuble, pas l'édifice municipal ou universitaire où l'on consulte des ouvrages. Then there's her bed. It's metallic and black, nothing special. On the bed there are two very comfortable pillows. Beside the bed there's a bedside table with a lamp and many more things. But Angie has other things to think: the mysterious package! She hurries up and unwraps the parcel.

She can't believe what she is seeing. There is an egg! Angie hides her discovery below her bed and goes to sleep. She gets a load of questions. What there is there inside this egg? Aurais-tu écrit ça en pensant à autre chose ?

During the breakfast, Angie tells Séba the story. < mémorise : to tell sb sth.<---> to say sth to sb Together, they decide to keep the egg in a safe place.<Le COD doit suivre le verbe immédiatement.

A few days later … The long-awaited egg begins to move. The shell breaks.

It was a great year for Angie, Séba and Marco. No, they hadn’t had a child even though Angie and Séba are a loving couple! Marco can fly and breathe fire or ice. He flies using large wings and his body is covered with scales. Marco has red and slanted eyes. He's kind and helpful. He possesses many different kinds of powers.

[Reenmau]

Merci beaucoup pour votre attention et votre aide !!

Et oui, j'ai voulu dire que son ancien patron ne sentait pas très bon, il me fallait une raison "valable" pour réussir à le mettre en colère.

Il ne me reste plus qu'à recopier ce texte et traduire votre suggestion. ( je la trouve sympa )

Et encore merci !

[Jean B]

Il ne me reste plus qu'à recopier ce texte et traduire votre suggestion. ( je la trouve sympa ) Tu peux y aller, je ne te réclamerai pas de droits d'auteur !

Et encore merci ! My pleasure!