correction SVP

[kagura]

Bonjour/bonsoir j'aurai besoin d'une correction svp.

sujet: If you were a famous historical character, who would you be?

If I were a historical figure I would choose Lady Diana.

She was born July 1, 1961 in Sandringham, England.

It has always been close to the royal family in England.

She was the first wife of Prince Charles.

She married him on 29 July 1981 and divorced in 1992.

So she had the title of Princess of Wales, and had with him two son called Prince William and Prince Harry.

In her life she did a lot of things.

She met different personality like Mother Theresa or Nelson Mandela.

She was famous for her many humanities actions.

In addition, she has always been respected and loved by everyone.

It has allowed to give another image of the monarchy and became the first celebrity Photographs by touching someone etteinte the AIDS virus.

So she had a strong influence.

Finally, she was known for his charm and his taste for fashion.

Unfortunately this strong personality died August 31, 1997 by the press continued with her second husband Al Fayed.

merci d'avance

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Inutile de mentionner "rapide" ou "urgent" dans le titre du sujet, la correction ne viendra ni plus rapidement ni plus urgemment.

Qu'on se le dise !

sujet: If you were a famous historical character, who would you be?

If I were a historical figure I would choose to be Lady Diana.

She was born on July 1, 1961 in Sandringham, England.

It She has was always been close to the royal family in England. Est-il besoin de te rappeler qu'elle est décédée ? =>> prétérit.

She was the first wife of Prince Charles.

She married him on 29 July 1981 and divorced in 1992.

So she had the title of Princess of Wales, and had with him two sons called Prince William and Prince Harry. Est-ce qu'il t'arrive de te relire ?

In her life she did a lot of things.

She met different personalities like Mother Theresa or Nelson Mandela. Bis !

She was famous for her many humane actions.Sers-toi d'un bon dictionnaire !

In addition, she has was always been respected and loved by everyone. Voir plus haut/ prétérit.

It has allowed to give She gave another image of the monarchy and became the first celebrity to have her photograph taken by touching someone etteinte the suffering from AIDS virus.

So she had a strong influence.

Finally, she was known for his her charm and his her taste for fashion. L'adjectif possessif s'accorde en genre avec le possesseur. Révise ta grammaire, tu as trop de lacunes sur des notions élémentaires.

Unfortunately this strong personality died on August 31, 1997 by the press continued with her second husband Al Fayed. Ça ne veut rien dire !

À l'avenir, plutôt que repiquer sottement un texte sur le net, je te suggère de produire un travail personnel.