kagura Posté(e) le 14 octobre 2012 Signaler Posté(e) le 14 octobre 2012 Bonjours, J'aimerai une correction surtout au niveau des temps: je dois utiliser le preterit et le present perfect mais j'ai surtout du mal avec present perfect et je ne vois pas trop où le placer. Merci d'avance One month ago I returned from a very long travel. This is two years that I was gone in the small village to Morocco to build a school for orphans. We were a team of 30 volunteers from differents contries. With the goodwill of several aid agency and our partners we were able to make a success of our project in yhe alloted. Morocco is a beautiful country and its inhabitants are very warm. All volunteers were housed in familiesf ree of charge and were very well received. We were afraid not to finish on time but all the neighbors helped us and sometimes spent the night on site. Every peoples: childrens and parents, we were asked if we had needed something. The opening day for me was memorable. The press was there and the chains of the world have interviewed. The orphans were all happy and then we presented their teachers. It was a wonderful human experience that I wish everyone to live.
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2012 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2012 Bonjour, One month ago I returned from a very long travel. This is It was two years that since I was had gone in to the small village to in Morocco to build a school for orphans.<Dans ton récit au passé, le séjour au Maroc a été antérieur, d'où l'emploi du past perfect had gone. En français, c'est l'emploi simultané de l'imparfait et du plus-que-parfait. We were a team of 30 volunteers from differents countries.< L'adjectif est INVARIABLE. With the goodwill of several aid agencies and our partners we were able to make a success of our project in the time alloted.- several implique un nom pluriel. - = "...dans le temps imparti", je suppose que c'est ce que tu as voulu dire ? Relis-toi toujours. Morocco is a beautiful country and its inhabitants are very warm. All volunteers were housed in families free of charge and were very well greeted / entertained / received. We were afraid not to finish on time but all the neighbors helped us and sometimes spent the night on site. Every peoples: All of us, childrens and parents, we were asked if we had needed something. - every est incompatible avec un pluriel. - people = pluriel irrégulier = des/les gens. Mémorise-le une bonne fois. - attention à la concordance des temps. The opening day for me was memorable. The press was there and the chains TV channels of from all over the world have interviewed people.<Apprends à te servir correctement du dictionnaire ! The orphans were all happy and then we presented their teachers. It was a wonderful human experience that I wish everyone to live.
kagura Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2012 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2012 Merci beaucoup pour la correction. c'est un peu plus claire à présent. Mais je peux vraiment pas utiliser le present perfect dans ce texte?
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2012 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2012 Mais je peux vraiment pas utiliser le present perfect dans ce texte ?
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