Petite Correction.

[cedricc]

Bonsoir,

J'ai un DM type bac à rendre pour la rentrée et je dois faire 2 réponses rédigées :

8) Sherpas refuse the request for “Hymalaya Trust” to close the Mount Everest for the tourists because by helping people who walk up mountain, sherpa earn an income. So, if the mountain is closed, they don’t have any money. But the sherpas need this because in Nepal £1.600 represents much money. Without this money, the indigenous population will become poor and will not be able to live.

9) The Nepali government makes nothing against the pollution of the Mount Everest. Indeed, grace in this mountain, the government wins lot of money because tourists spend many and pay a royalty to the Nepal. So, as long as the authorities earn money they will not do anything.

J'aurais donc aimé que quelqu'un me corrige mes fautes et qu'ils m'expliquent (brièvement), pour pas que je les refasse plus tard

Merci d'avance & bonnes fêtes de fin d'année.

Cedric

[Demoiselle973]

BonJour Cedric!

Alors tes reponses sont biens il y a juste quelques petites fautes!

Je copie ta phrase et je souligne ce que j'ai corrigé!

8) The Sherpas refuse the request for the “Hymalaya Trust” to close the Mount Everest to the tourists because by helping people who walk up the mountain, The Sherpas earn an income. So, if the mountain is closed, they don’t have any money. But the sherpas need this because in Nepal £1.600 represent a lot of money. Without this money, the indigenous population will become poor and will not be able to live.

Il ne faut pas que oublie les prépositions "the" parce que ici tu parle d'un groupe spécifique et non de toute la population! Pour dire fermé aux touristes on utilise TO et non FOR.

9) The Nepali government does nothing against the pollution of the Mount Everest. Indeed, thanks to this mountain, the government gets a lot of money because tourists spend a lot and pay a royalty to the Nepal. So, as long as the authorities earn money they will not do nothing.

On utilise le verbe DO et non MAKE parceque make c'est plus fabriquer! Grace a ce dit "Thanks to" . Ici le verbe Win veut plutot dire gagner un prix ou un cadeau donc on utilise Get qui veut dire avoir. "They will do anything" ça veut dire ils feront tout! Rien se dit Nothing

Voila j'espère que tu a compris mes explications!

A +

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Petit complément explicatif.

Bonsoir,

J'ai un DM type bac à rendre pour la rentrée et je dois faire 2 réponses rédigées :

8) Sherpas refuse the request for of the “Hymalaya Trust” to close the Mount Everest for to the tourists because by helping people who walk up the mountain, sherpas earn an income.