Corrigez Moi Please

[1st]

j'ai une rédaction à faire ,et j'aimerais bien que vous corrigez mes fautes svp.

en prenant compte que c'est une lettre et qu'il faut faire attention aux temps employés. parfois j'ai ecrit des phrases en français car je ne sais pas comment le traduire et vraiment désolé que ça soit si long.

I hope that you are well and don't worry for me.I am well.

I am going tell you what's happened since I have left ,since 2 weeks.

when I have left you , I walked for 2 hours alone in (en pleine nuit) night ,until a man with his horse came towards (jusqu' a un homme avec son cheval vienne vers moi) me to propose me to take me his home. This nice man's name is matt ,he is married and has 2 children , a daughter and a son who are the same age than me ( ils ont le meme age que moi).

So ,I spent my first night his home in his son's room .before to sleep ,i got know Will (j'ai conaissance avec lui) who is nice boy ,he told me his life,his family, and his dream of becoming a farmer like me!

The following day,given that (sachant que) I want to become a farmer like his son ,Matt take his son and me along 1 km of the village( à 1km du village) to go at senior farmer 's home who is 60 years old.It is him who teach us to become a good farmer every day except weekend.

matt proposed me to live and to eat at his home until i want (jusqu'a ce je veux).Of course ,i accepeted this proposition who have made me happy. i adore this family ,they are very sympathic.

ah oui!I have forgotten to say it :i get a job to earn money(pour gagner de l'argent) ,I work each weekend as assistant in the doctor of the village(comme assistant chez un docteur du village).

With this money , I will buy in seven months a house to you live with me (pour que vous veniez vivre avec moi ) in this beautiful village.

here ,it is quiet , everybody know itself and get on.(tout le monde se connait et s'entend bien)

voilà ,how did it happen when i left , i will write a letter in 2 weeks and we will see ourselves in 7 months maybe in my new house ( nous nous verrons peut etre...)

sachez que vous me manquez beaucoup et I love you.

merci beaucoup d'avance.

a+

[afreemind]

Salut!!!!!!!!!

alors voilà,j'ai corrigé,et peut-êter changé qqs fois des tournures de pgrases qui n'allait pas trop mais en essayant de garder ton travail le plus possible..

I hope that you are well and don't worry about me.I am fine.

I am going to tell you what's happened since I left ,2 weeks ago.

when I left you , I walked for 2 hours alone in the middle of the night ,until a man with his horse came towards me to asked me if I wanted to go to his house. This nice man's name is Matt ,he is married and has 2 children , a daughter and a son who are the same age of me.

So ,I spent my first night in his home in his son's room .before I went to sleep ,I got to know Will who is a nice boy .He told me about his life,his family, and his dream of becoming a farmer ,like me!

The following day,as I wanted to become a farmer like his son ,Matt took his son and me about 1 km away from the village to go to a 60 years old farmer's house.He teaches us to become good farmers every day,except at the weekends.

Matt asked me if I wanted to live and eat at his home for as long s I wanted.Of course ,i accepted this proposition which made me happy. I adore this family ,they are very nice.

Oh yes!I forgot to say :I've got a job to earn money.I work each weekend as the doctor's assistant in the village

With this money , I will buy a house in seven months,in this beautiful village,for us to live in together.Here ,it is quiet , everybody knows each other and gets on well together.

Well this is what happened when I left.I will write another letter in 2 weeks and we will see ourselves in 7 months maybe in my new house.

I miss you a lot,and I love you dearly.

[1st]

merci beaucoup d'avoir pris du temps pour me corriger .

bye