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Je dois refaire un travail sur l'imagination de la suite d'une histoire D'aghatha christie

Quelqu'un peut m'aider à corriger mes fautes et à arranger l'aspect de mon texte merci

All of a sudden , Laura sprang of settee such a possesed .She took her keep,lit radio set and danced.

She humed :"you want to kill me, you want to rape me, but today it's me your killer ,sweety"

She threw her husband near fire-place , stretched him a hand and pushed him on table.

" sweetheart,what happens? Are you lunatic? "he said in a suspicious voice

Heroine , bacame whitish, frightened ,and weird .He whispered

"oh my god , she know ,Since when ?By who? How?, it's not possible "

Laura, approach more and more of her husband who was anxious , she pulled his cheek and declared ironicaly:

"my poor cat, yes i'm lunatic of you and also of your lie .Are you thinking I'm so untutored , stupid and bloody?"

Heroine didn't know what do , kill her wife or allay situation .

Panic-stricken , he didn't see his wife , behind him .She had a pointed knife in her hand , just as a roller of scotch .

She appeared near him, and thereafter Heroine started of his chair.

In room,standed a fight beetween two lovebirds.

Expect it,Laura stabed Heroine with her knife but unfortunately it was not a thrust knife .

By love she didn't want to kill her barley sugar

Consequently she rolled up with scotch charles's mouth .

Laura dashed to phone and called policeman with all elegance and sobbed:

"I have trapped Heroine Lemaitre , he is here , he is my victime"

Shortly ,policeman came and arrested the killer who was imprison for life

Two week after,Laura died by madness, she was bury near the prison where resived her husband.

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