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[lenalee]

Bonjour, j'ai besoin de votre aide pour savoir si il n'y a pas beaucoup de fautes dans mon devoir et d'une aide pour une correction, voici mon devoir:

Wednesday, October 27th

01:30pm

I'm going to the cinema this evening with my friends. My friends and I do not often agree what movie to watch because i like drame movie and my friends like action movie.

10:45pm

I see “The American”, this movie is (very)useless. After the cinema i had a little “lunch” with my friends, i ate a big waffle with nutella and whipped cream.

Thursday, October 28th

02:25pm

Well, the holidays are over in a week, so today I decided to do my homework,so I go to librairy.

06:00pm

Finally i didn’t do my homework because i wanted to frame the detention letter that miss T**** will to give me... More seriously, I did not want to make them. I am a big idler!

Friday, October 29th

09:00pm

I did nothing... I exaggerate a bit,I slept (a lot) ,I read, i ate (a lot too). Then I finally found the motivation to do my homework. I have make my sheets of revision for the BAC.

Saturday, October 30th

11:20pm

I slept a lot after I joined my friends. I passed a little good day. My friends have all a psychological problem but I love them J

11:45pm

I shall have liked making the trip in England with all the class. Apparently they had fun well and they discovered many thing even if some did not appreciate families (small thought for Mimi J)

Sunday, October 31st

01:15 am

I didn’t do anything special I stayed at home because the weather was awful.

I see “les amours imaginaires”, it’s a great, gorgeous movie! It’s a movie from Xavier Dolan. It’s the story of Francis and Mary, two friends who love the same person, engaged in a twisted competition to woo her. However I have a small preference for its first movie “J’ai tué ma mère”.

Merci d'avance pour votre aide

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Selon toute vraisemblance, tu fais le récit de tes activités de vacances, c'est donc le prétérit qu'il faut employer toutes les fois que nécessaire, pas le présent.

À partir du balisage en rouge, fais toutes les corrections que je ne t'ai pas données directement en caractères gras bleus.

Bonjour, j'ai besoin de votre aide pour savoir si il n'y a pas beaucoup de fautes dans mon devoir et d'une aide pour une correction, voici mon devoir:

Wednesday, October 27th

01:30pm

I'm going to the cinema this evening with my friends. My friends and I do not often agree what movie to watch because i I like drama movies and my friends like action movies.

10:45pm

I see< + autre verbe “The American”, this movie is (very)useless. After the cinema i had a little “lunch <impropre” with my friends, i ate a big waffle with nutella and whipped cream.

Thursday, October 28th

02:25pm

Well, the holidays are over in a week, so today I decided to do my homework,so I go to library.

06:00pm

Finally i didn’t do my homework because i wanted to frame the detention letter that miss T**** will to give me... More seriously, I did not want to make <autre verbe them. I am a big idler!

Friday, October 29th

09:00pm

I did nothing... I exaggerate a bit, I slept (a lot), I read, i ate (a lot too). Then I finally found the motivation to do my homework. I have make< autre verbe my sheets of revision for the BAC.

Saturday, October 30th

11:20pm

I slept a lot after I joined my friends. I passed <verbe impropre a little good day. All my friends have all a psychological problem but I love them J

11:45pm

I shall have liked making wish I had done / I would have liked to do/the trip in England with all the class. Apparently they had great fun well and they discovered many thing <besoin de lunettes ? even if some did not appreciate families (small thought for Mimi J)

Sunday, October 31st

01:15 am

I didn’t do anything special I stayed at home because the weather was awful.

I see< autre verbe encore “les amours imaginaires”, it’s a great, gorgeous movie! It’s a movie from Xavier Dolan. It’s the story of Francis and Mary, two friends who love the same person, engaged in a twisted competition to woo her. However I have a small preference for its first movie “J’ai tué ma mère”.

Merci d'avance pour votre aide

[lenalee]

Merci pour ton aide, j'aurai dû mieux me relire car j'admets le fait que j'ai fais des fautes d'inattentions. J'ai corrigé mes fautes, sont elles bien corrigées?

Wednesday, October 27th

01:30pm

I went to the cinema this evening with my friends. My friends and I do not often agree what movie to watch because i I like drama movies and my friends like action movies.

10:45pm

I watched “The American”, this movie is (very)useless. After the cinema we had a little snack with my friends, we ate a big waffle with nutella and whipped cream.

Thursday, October 28th

02:25pm

Well, the holidays are over in a week, so today I decided to do my homework,so I going to library.

06:00pm

Finally didn’t do my homework because, wanted to frame the detention letter that miss T**** will give me... More seriously, I did not want to do them. I am a big idler!

Friday, October 29th

09:00pm

I did nothing... I exaggerate a bit, I slept (a lot), I read, ate (a lot too). Then I finally found the motivation to do my homework. I have did my sheets of revision for the BAC.

Saturday, October 30th

11:20pm

I slept a lot after I joined my friends. I passed <verbe impropre(ici je ne vois pas quel autre verbe utiliser) a little good day. All my friends have a psychological problem but I love them

11:45pm

I wish I had done / I would have liked to do/the trip in England with all the class. Apparently they had great fun and they discovered many things even if some did not appreciate families (small thought for Mimi J)

Sunday, October 31st

01:15 am

I didn’t do anything special I stayed at home because the weather was awful.

I watched “les amours imaginaires”, it’s a great, gorgeous movie! It’s a movie from Xavier Dolan. It’s the story of Francis and Mary, two friends who love the same person, engaged in a twisted competition to woo her. However I have a small preference for its first movie “J’ai tué ma mère”.

psychologicalS problemS (j'avais oublié cette faute aussi)

[Jean B]

Merci pour ton aide, j'aurais dû mieux me relire car j'admets le fait que j'ai commis/fait des fautes d'inattentions. J'ai corrigé mes fautes, sont elles bien corrigées ?

Wednesday, October 27th

01:30pm

I went to the cinema this evening with my friends. My friends and I do not often agree what movie to watch because i I like drama movies and my friends like action movies.

10:45pm

I watched “The American”, this movie is (very)useless. After the cinema wehad a little snack with my friends, we ate a big waffle with nutella and whipped cream.

Thursday, October 28th

02:25pm

Well, the holidays are over in a week, so today I decided to do my homework, so I going went to the library.

06:00pm

Finally I didn’t do my homework because I wanted to frame the detention letter that miss T**** will give me... More seriously, I did not want to do them. I am a big idler!

Friday, October 29th

09:00pm

I did nothing... I exaggerate a bit, I slept (a lot), I read, ate (a lot too). Then I finally found the motivation to do my homework. I have did my sheets of revision for the BAC.

Saturday, October 30th

11:20pm

I slept a lot, after later I joined my friends. I passed <verbe impropre(ici je ne vois pas quel autre verbe utiliser) spent/had a little good day. All my friends have a psychological problem but I love them

11:45pm

I wish I had done / I would have liked to do/the trip in England with all the class. Apparently they had great fun and they discovered many things even if some did not appreciate families (small thought for Mimi J)

Sunday, October 31st

01:15 am

I didn’t do anything special I stayed at home because the weather was awful.

I watched “les amours imaginaires”, it’s a great, gorgeous movie! It’s a movie from Xavier Dolan. It’s the story of Francis and Mary, two friends who love the same person, engaged in a twisted competition to woo her. However I have a small preference for its his first movie “J’ai tué ma mère”.