Analyse Publicité

[Zelda32]

Bonjour,

J'aurais aimé une correction des fautes de syntaxe/grammaire/ortho mais aussi sur le fond, savoir si c'est compréhensible.

C'est une analyse de publicité mais sans la pub, vous devriez tout de même comprendre, dîtes moi si c'est le cas

The humor of the ad is situated at the level of the picture, but not only. The bubble «Come on, let’s fly” allows to give the floor to the fishes and so to personify them. We find a lot this kind of humor at Easyjet, a simple and light humor, sometimes in the form of pun.

The color is very important at Easyjet. In the creation of the society, the orange color was little present at the airline companies which bet on more reassuring colors as the blue and the white. They thus took a risk by introducing a color so aggressive, but their goal was not the same that of the big companies. For Easyjet, the orange must be synonymic of low cost.

To go back over humor in the ad, it was demonstrated that the humor doesn't sell more, and doesn't allow remembering better the product. If the company insists so much on the funny sentence it is for another reason. Probably, the time which the reader spends to smile in front of the ad, it is the time that he spends to be permeated with colors. So, relative rarity of orange is going to call back him automatically Easyjet.

About the logo, it is essential; it is always inserted into the ad of various manners. Here, we chose to insert it in the form of banner on the bottom right of the ad. The logo Easyjet has a very specific font which is CooperBlack. It is an impressive but dynamic font, so, it suggests the safety of devices for example but also the dynamism of the company which we find through the numerous destinations which it proposes. We find once more the main color of the ad, orange surrounding the name of the company. The main color is rather lively, it is important that the rest of the ad is qualified with soothing or neutral colors as the background, white, or the jar, blue.

Easyjet is a low-cost company; she points up and insists enormously on its advantageous price. Its advertising campaigns are simple, compound of few elements. They bet on the humor, on the attractive and specific color to the company as well as on the clear message: our prices are the most competitive.

Merci d'avance

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Vu que personne ne te répond, je m'y colle !

Corrections à faire en fonction de mes remarques et suggestions, hormis bien entendu celles que je t'aurai données directement en caractères gras.

Bonjour,

J'aurais aimé une correction des fautes de syntaxe/grammaire/ortho mais aussi sur le fond, savoir si c'est compréhensible.

C'est une analyse de publicité mais sans la pub, vous devriez tout de même comprendre, dîtes-moi si c'est le cas. Sur ce plan là, fais-moi confiance pour te dire la vérité, toute la vérité, rien que la vérité.

The humor of the ad is situated at the level of the picture, but not only.D'emblée, tu commences par la fin, à savoir que tu donnes ta perception de la chose avant même de l'avoir décrite. Ce n'est pas logique. Tu gagnerais à t'inspirer de la fiche méthodologique du site anglaisfacile. Je te la mets en pj à la fin. The bubble «Come on, let's fly" allows to give the floor to the fishes and so to personify them.Premier souci, qu'as-tu voulu dire par "give the floor to" ? We find a lot of this kind of humor at with Easyjet, a simple and light humor, sometimes in the form of pun.

The Color is very important at for Easyjet.On ne met pas "the" devant les noms employés dans la généralité. In the creation of the society, the orange color was little present at the in airline companies which bet on more reassuring colors as the blue and the white.- Le début de cette phrase est un calque évident du français. Suggestion : When the company was created...

- society, c'est la société des hommes et des femmes, pas la société commerciale ou industrielle.

- Quel bleu ? Quel blanc ? Thus they thus took a risk by introducing a color so aggressive, but their goal was not the same that of as the big companies'one.- Il vaut mieux ne pas séparer le pronom sujet du verbe.

- Quelle est la place de l'adjectif ? Rectifie.

- same...as For Easyjet, the orange must be synonymic synonymous of with low cost.Attention au barbarisme ! Équipe-toi d'un bon dictionnaire bilingue.

To go back over humor in the ad, it was demonstrated that the humor doesn't sell more, and doesn't allow remembering the product better the product. If the company insists so much on the funny sentence it is for another reason. Probably, the time which the reader spends to smile in front of the ad it is the time that he spends to be permeated with colors.Pas de double sujet en anglais. C'est à mémoriser. So, a relative rarity of orange is going to call back remind him Easyjet automatically.

About the logo, it is essential; it is always inserted into the ad of in various manners. Here, we chose to insert it in the form of a banner on at the bottom right of the ad. The Easyjet logo has a very specific font which is CooperBlack.- Révise les prépositions de manière à bien faire le tri entre les statiques et les dynamiques.

- Dans un nom composé de nom + nom, le nom noyau se place après car le premier joue le rôle de déterminant, a donc valeur d'adjectif et se place logiquement devant. It is an impressive but dynamic font, so it suggests the safety of devices for example but also the dynamism of the company which we find through the numerous destinations which it proposes. Once more, we find once more the main color of the ad, orange surrounding the name of the company. The main color is rather lively, it is important that the rest of the ad is qualified with soothing or neutral colors as the background, white, or the jar, blue.

Easyjet is a low-cost company; she points up and insists enormously on its advantageous price. - Depuis quand le nom company serait-il de "sexe féminin" ?

- tarifs ne serait-il pas préférable ? Its advertising campaigns are simple, compound composed of few elements. They bet on the humor, on the attractive and specific color devoted to the company as well as on the clear message: our prices are the most competitive ones.

Merci d'avance