Pouvez Vous Me Corriger Mes Phrase Svp

[rapsa]

bonjour

pouvez vous me corriger mes phrase svp.

Voici les phrases:

1)The Statue of Liberty is less loug than the Empire State Building.

2)The Empire State Building close later than the statue of Liberty.

3)The Statue of Liberty is the oldest of others Building (the Chrysler and the Empire State Building)

4) The Empire State Building is more recent than the Statue of Liberty.

5)The Statue of Liberty opens earlier than the Empire State Building.

6)The Empire State Building's admission is as cheap as the museum of modern art's admission.

7)Brooklyn's population is bigger than Manhattan.

8)The Empire Statue Building is higher than the Chrysler Building.

9)The Statue of Liberty is more famous than the Chrysler Building.

merci

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

bonjour

pouvez vous me corriger mes phrase svp.

Voici les phrases:

1)The Statue of Liberty is less loug lower than the Empire State Building. <Tu avais le choix, ou bien le comparatif de supériorité de low = lower, ou bien le comparatif d'infériorité de son contraire, high = less high. Mais il vaut mieux employer la première solution.

2)The Empire State Building closes later than the statue of Liberty. <S au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est au singulier.

3)The Statue of Liberty is the older of the others buildings, the Chrysler Building and the Empire State Building. <Le comparatif est préférable au superlatif lorsque la comparaison ne porte que sur 2 éléments. En fait, l'anglais considère que la Liberté n'est la plus grande que par rapport aux 2 autres bâtiments. Quand "other" est adjectif, il reste invariable..

4) The Empire State Building is more recent than the Statue of Liberty. OK

5)The Statue of Liberty opens earlier than the Empire State Building. OK

6)Admission to the Empire State Building's admission is as cheap as cheaper than admission to the Museum of Modern Art's admission. <Ici, le cas possessif est impossible. À 9 dollars l'entrée pour l'un contre 10 dollars pour l'autre, 1 dollar de moins, c'est meilleur marché.

7)The population of Brooklyn's population is bigger than the one of Manhattan. <Dans une comparaison, il y a au moins 2 termes.

8)The Empire State Building is higher than the Chrysler Building. OK

9)The Statue of Liberty is more famous than the Chrysler Building. OK

merci