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Je dois faire en anglais un petit paragraphe me décrivant ( destiné à ma correspondante anglaise )

je l'ai fait à vous de corrigez les fautes ou de me donner des phrases mieux que celles-ci.

Merci

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Hello,

My name is Ikram, Krami it is my nickname. I have got fourteen years and I live to ****** I am in the school ******* .

I like the school because I have many friends, the professors are nice ! My favorite matiere is English,but I hate the physics.

In my family I have two brothers and two sister I love it , we are a great family.

After school I see my friends, I surf on internet msn...

I also love music.

To finish , I want to be professor of english.

See you, Ikram

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Bonjour,

Je dois faire en anglais un petit paragraphe me décrivant ( destiné à ma correspondante anglaise )

Je l'ai fait. À vous de corriger les fautes ou de me donner des phrases mieux que celles-ci.

Merci.

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Hello,

My name is Ikram, Krami <it>(1) is my nickname. I <have got> am(2) fourteen (years old) and I live <to> in****** I <am in the> attend school ******* .

I like <the>(3) school because I have many friends, the teachers/professors are nice! My favourite <matiere> subject is English, but I hate <the> physics.

In my family <I have> there are two brothers and two sisters, I love it, we are a great family.

After school I see my friends, I surf on the Internet, msn...

I also love music.

To finish, I want to be a teacher of English.

See you, Ikram

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