chacha7611 Posté(e) le 12 mars 2009 Signaler Posté(e) le 12 mars 2009 Bonjour à tous, voilà aujourd'hui confronté à l'exercice de la lettre, pour obtenir un pret d'une banque, sujet très passionnant... Enfin passons, pouvez-vous m'indiquer les fautes que j'ai commises?? Merci d'avance, Bonne journée John Smith Component B.V. 39 Herengracht AB Emmen Director Hans De Jong Bankrabo 32 Donderdagstraat AB 123 Amsterdam 16 February Dear Mr. De Jong I am the director of Component B.V., and we planned to build a new warehouse for our company. That’s why I am writing you this letter to ask for a loan from your bank. Indeed, one of our most important customers Phillips has launched a new product and asked us to make 3 new components to assemble this product. However, to make these components we need new machines and a lot of place to stock in-progress and finished products. Our company needs this project to face the current crisis and to avoid any lay-offs. Moreover, this project is going to have very good repercussions. In fact, we forecasted to increase our turnover of 25% during the next 5 years. For this project, we will buy the machines with our available money thanks to our important cash flows. Thus, we need only a loan for the warehouse. The architect told us that this building will cost around $1.5 million. I hope your bank will offer us a good loan with a very attractive rate. If it is possible, I would like to have a meeting with you as soon as possible to discuss about the different documents and guarantees you need to accept this loan. You can contact me by e-mail: j.smith@componentbv.nl, by phone +31678594939 or with the address mentioned above. Yours sincerely, John Smith Director of Component B.V. j.smith@componentbv.nl
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 12 mars 2009 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 12 mars 2009 Bonjour, Bonjour à tous, voilà aujourd'hui confronté à l'exercice de la lettre, pour obtenir un pret d'une banque, sujet très passionnant... Enfin passons, pouvez-vous m'indiquer les fautes que j'ai commises?? Merci d'avance, Bonne journée John Smith Component B.V. 39 Herengracht AB Emmen Director Hans De Jong Bankrabo 32 Donderdagstraat AB 123 Amsterdam 16 February Dear Mr. De Jong I am the director of Component B.V., and we are planning to build a new warehouse for our company. That is why I am writing you this letter to ask for a loan from your bank. Indeed, one of our most important customers, Phillips, has launched a new product and asked us to make 3 new components to assemble this product. However, to make these components we need new machines and a lot of room to stock in-progress and finished products. Our company needs this project to face the current crisis and to avoid any lay-offs. Moreover, this project is going to have very good repercussions. In fact, we are anticipating a 25% increase of our turnover during the next 5 years. For this project, we will buy the machines with our available money thanks to our important cash flow. Thus, we need only a loan for the warehouse. The architect told us that this building will cost around $1.5 million. I hope your bank will offer us a good loan with a very attractive rate. I would appreciate to meet you as soon as possible to discuss about the different documents and guarantees you need to accept this loan. You can contact me by e-mail: j.smith@componentbv.nl, by phone +31678594939 or at the address mentioned above. Yours sincerely, John Smith Director of Component B.V. j.smith@componentbv.nl
chacha7611 Posté(e) le 13 mars 2009 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 13 mars 2009 Merci bien JRB, Bon weekend
TheBar Posté(e) le 3 juin 2009 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 juin 2009 Vous semblez possèder une excellente maîtrise du sujet! Merci beaucoup. Simulation pret
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