A La Recherche D'un Plan Pour Commentaire Composé

[-léa]

Bonjours à tous les utilisateurs,

Il ne me reste plus qu'une semaine et demi pour composer un commentaire sur un passage du Le hussard sur le toit, de J.Giono.

Le passage à étudier se trouve de la page 135 à 136, de "C'était ce qu'on appelle ici une "gallerie"..." à "...une sorte de goudron mordoré". Je ne trouve pas de quoi faire un plan. Si vous avez des idées, s'il vous plaît dites les moi, même s'il ne s'agit pas d'un plan complet je le construirai ensuite moi même.

Merci d'avance.

[lily520]

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