Correction

[soane]

pourriez vous me corriger mes fautes SVP c'est urgent merci

-Euh yes, said Gur of a hesitating air.

-(Donc) I call you at home tomorrow and...

-But you do not come with me?

-No, you should not see us together. Furthermore I have a little gift to be settled(adjusted).

-All right as you want him(it).

The train stops(arrests) at the station. Bruno came down(fell) from the train rashly and incited at the

idea of the murder. Guy remained immovable on the footpath(banquette) and decided to come

down(to fall) from the train while thinking of the murder.

-But what did I make? He says

-I go beyond grave troubles.

-He(It) arrived to him and crossed his wife.

-Good evening my darling

-But where do you go?

-To make a journey(running), she says

-At the present time there?

-Yes but I am not long time

20 minutes passed, the telephone rang

-Allo!

-Allo!

-You are always agree for the murder?

-Yes, he answered in a weak voice

- Here is my plan

For 20 minutes Bruno explained to Guy the progress of the murder of MiriamThe woman of Guy returned at the end of 2 a.m., it went up directly in the room. Guy smelled on it

odor of the perfume for man. He left to lie down while thinking of dead of Miriam the following

day. During the Guy night was awaked by the whisper of its wife in the living room, it surprised the

conversation with the telephone and it discovered that it spoke with Bruno.

[gizmo_lutchkaya]

J'espère que cela va t'aider et je souhaite savoir si c'était bien ou non..Merci

La prochaine fois, donne les phrases françaises, cela me permettrait mieux de t'aider.

-Euh yes, said Guy hesitatingly

-So, I will call you at your place tomorrow and...

-But you are not coming with me?

-No, you should not see us together. Furthermore, I have a little gift to be settled(adjusted)............je comprends pas cette phrase mais j'en doute très fort qu'elle soit bonne

-All right as you want.

The train stops at the station. Bruno came down from the train rashly and was excited at the idea of the murder. Guy remained stuck on the bench and then decided to come down from the train while thinking of the murder.

-But what will I do? He says

-I will be in serious trouble.

-He came to him and crossed his wife.

-Good evening my darling

-But where are you going?

-To do jogging, she says

-At this time?

-Yes, but I will not be long

20 minutes passed, the telephone rang

-Hello!

-Hello!

-You are still on for the murder?

-Yes, he answered in a weak voice

- Here is my plan

For 20 minutes Bruno explained to Guy the different steps of Miriam's murder. Guy's wife returned after two hours, she went up directly in the room. Guy smelled man's perfume on her. He lied down while thinking of the death of Miriam the following day. During the night, Guy was awakened by the whisper of her wife in the living room, he overheard the conversation on the telephone and he discovered that she was speaking to Bruno.