Besoin D'aide Pour Une Contraction

[Djeust]

Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous corriger ma contraction?

Merci d'avance

According to specialists, since always, there have been being societies with female government. For exemple, in bees or with women like Elizabeth [d'Angleterre] or Théodora [de Byzance].

However, most of societies and organisation of the world show influence of men. So we can wonder if societies who are managed by women would have been differents from our societies. In fact men are afraid of women alter their government.

Male power differs from female power who is rather an infiuence. For exemple in many families, women manage. Besides, female power gets more and more importance in societies.

In fact, women leave silence and men delegate responsabilities to her. So we go to a change, what will become of our societies?

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Corriger non, baliser les erreurs oui. Après tout c'est aujourd'hui dimanche et j'ai bien le droit de "me reposer".

À toi l'auto-correction, c'est plus formateur.

According to specialists, since always, there have been being societies with female government. For exemple, in bees or with women like Elizabeth [d'Angleterre] or Théodora [de Byzance].

However, most of societies and organisation of the world show influence of men. So we can wonder if societies who are managed by women would have been differents from our societies. In fact men are afraid of women alter their government.

Male power differs from female power who is rather an infiuence. For exemple in many families, women manage. Besides, female power gets more and more importance in societies.

In fact, women leave silence and men delegate responsabilities to her. So we go to a change, what will become of our societies?

Bon travail et à te lire.

[Djeust]

merci de votre aide!

According to specialists, since always(since car cela représente une date), there have been being (pour la forme verbale, j'ai ajouté un BE-ING pour insister que c'est toujours le cas aujourd'hui) societies with female government. For example, in bees (j'ai voulu mettre "chez les abeilles" et dans le dictionnaire il y a "chez les renards->in foxes") or with women like Elizabeth from England or Théodora from Bysance.

However, most societies and organisation in the world show influence of men. So we can wonder if societies which are managed by women would have been different from our societies?. In fact men are afraid women alter their government.

Male power differs from female power which is rather an infiuence. For example in many families, women manage. Besides, female power gets more and more importance in societies.

In fact, women break the silence and men delegate responsbilities to women. So we run to a change, what will become of our societies?