Biographie Sur Malcom X

[francis du 39]

Bonjour a vous tous, pour mardi 18 novembre 2008 je dois rendre une biographie sur malcom x par contre vu que mon niveau en anglais est deplorable serait-ce possible de m'aider? Merci d'avance

[Jean B]

Bonjour a vous tous, pour mardi 18 novembre 2008 je dois rendre une biographie sur malcom x par contre vu que mon niveau en anglais est deplorable serait-ce possible de m'aider? Merci d'avance

[francis du 39]

Bonjour,

Voici deux liens, l'un en français, l'autre en anglais, qui te donnent sa biographie.

Tu peux bien sûr en trouver d'autres en interrogeant google.

Bon travail.

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup JRB c'est sympa je vais travailler dessus et je te montrerais ma biographie une fois finie

[francis du 39]

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[francis du 39]

Malcolm Little was born in 1925 in Omaha. His father had three childrens with his first woman: Ella, Mary and Earl junior. With his second woman, he had eight childrens: Wilfred, Hilda, Philbert, Malcolm, Reginald, Wesley, Yvonne et Robert. In 1931 his father was kill by a streetcar. Malcolm lives with his mother during eight years. In 1939 she was formally committed to the state mental hospital. Malcolm and his brothers are dispersed

in homes.

In his schooling with the withes, he is the first of his class. He moved to New York in 1943, in Harlem he traffic drugg, he became gambling, racketeering, robbery, and steering prostitutes.

On February 27, Malcolm x came in prison for eight to ten years, on August 7, 1952, Malcolm received parole and was released from prison. He had already changed his surname to X in 1952. He choose X because it’s a surname of slave. He had already created “nation of Islam” in the same year.

In 1958, Malcolm X married Betty X. The couple had six childrens, six girls: Attallah, Ilyasah, Gamilah Lumumbah, and twins, Malaak and Malikah.

On February 21, 1965, Malcom X was assassinated, when he speak to a meeting a man arrive and shoot, Malcolm X fell and two other men and draw him 16 times.

et voila jesper kel est bi1

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Malcolm Little was born in 1925 in Omaha. His father had three children<s> with his first <woman> wife: Ella, Mary and Earl junior. With his second <woman> wife, he had eight children<s>: Wilfred, Hilda, Philbert, Malcolm, Reginald, Wesley, Yvonne et Robert. In 1931 his father was killed by a street car. Malcolm lived with his mother during eight years. In 1939 she was formally committed to the state mental hospital. Malcolm and his brothers <are dispersed> were scattered in homes.

In his schooling with the whites, he <is> was the first of his class. He moved to New York in 1943, in Harlem he trafficked drug, he became a gambler, a racketeer, a robber, and he steered prostitutes.

On February 27, Malcolm x <came> was imprisoned for eight to ten years, on August 7, 1952, Malcolm received parole and was released from prison. He had already changed his surname to X in 1952. He chose X because it's a surname of slave. He had already created "nation of Islam" in the same year.

In 1958, Malcolm X married Betty X. The couple had six children<s>, six girls: Attallah, Ilyasah, Gamilah, Lumumbah, and twins, Malaak and Malikah.

On February 21 1965, Malcom X was assassinated, while he was speaking <to> at a meeting. A man arrived and shot him. Malcolm X fell and two other men <and draw> fired at him 16 times.

Et voilà. J'espère <kel> que c'est bien.<1> <Tu es prié d'éviter ce style d'écriture sur le site.

Je plains sincèrement ton professeur, le pauvre ! A vrai dire, je crains que tu ne te sois livré à une savante magouille à partir de plusieurs documents piqués ici ou là. Je n'en veux pour preuve que tous les mots soulignés de la fin du deuxième paragraphe qui renvoient à Wikipédia par des liens hypertexte ainsi que la mise en page typique en pareil cas. Libre à toi de vouloir te moquer du monde mais gare aux représailles. Te voilà averti.

[MrPanier]

Hélas, Francis n'a pas vu ce post à temps. Il a du aller se coucher trop tôt!

Il avait pourtant un mois pour prévoir sont travail.

Les conseils de ce site étaient pourtant bons.

Il n'a donc même pas pu profiter de cette bonne correction.

Mais il en recevra une en temps voulu!

[Jean B]

Hélas, Francis n'a pas vu ce post à temps. Il a du aller se coucher trop tôt!

Il avait pourtant un mois pour prévoir sont travail.

Les conseils de ce site étaient pourtant bons.

Il n'a donc même pas pu profiter de cette bonne correction.

Mais il en recevra une en temps voulu!