Correction De Phrase

[dinanono75]

bonsoir

pouvez vous svp me corriger ses phrases merci

You know(si il ya une autre expression pour tu sais n'hésitez pas à me le dire) that I will be heavy hearted when you will leave me,I will worry for you

I want to beak away from this gravity

Dad you have and always will have blinkers,Dad it's my future prospects Which is at stake

merci de votre aide

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Pouvez-vous SVP me corriger ces phrases ? Merci. < Et la ponctuation et l'orthographe ? Vas-tu un jour faire un effort dans ces domaines aussi ?

You know that I will be heavy-hearted when you leave me, I will worry for you.

I want to break away from this gravity.

Dad you have and always will have blinkers, Dad it's my future prospects which are at stake.

Merci de votre aide.