Correction Texte En Anglais

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Bonjour a tous,

quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce texte s'il vous plait?

My dear parents, I want you to listen to me once again,

but this time you must understand that I'm very serious

and that what I have to say is very important for me.

I know that the Hindus and especially the womens, we

have to marry early in our life. But, for me, the marrriage

have to be something very important and especially, it

mustn't be an obligation, and less, a way to get out of

poverty. I think that a woman, even being a Hindu, must

have to choose with who she is going to spend the rest

of her days.

Moreover, I want you to know that I would like to

continue my studies. It's my greatest wish, and that

would permite me to get money in the futur, and in that

way, I would help our family to get out of poverty.

I really don't want to marry with a man that I don't know

and even less just for a dowry. There are things that

money can't buy: and love is one of them.

Moreover, we eould be very unhappy not to be abble to

spend our youth with our family and beeing free.

I don't need nothing, just to continue as I am: spending

my youth and studying. I'm just 14, don't forget it.

So please, please, I want to continue my studies and

living with you.

Merci beaucoup et a bientôt.

[Jean B]

Bonjour à tous,

Quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît?

My dear parents,

I want you to listen to me once again, but this time you must understand that I'm very serious and that what I have to say is very important for me.

I know that <the> Hindus and especially <the> women<s>, we have to marry early in our life. But, for me, <the> marrriage <have> has to be something very important and especially, it mustn't be an obligation, and less, a way to get out of poverty. I think that a woman, even being a Hindu, must <have to> choose with whom she is going to spend the rest of her days.

Moreover, I want you to know that I would like to continue my studies. It's my greatest wish, and that would permit<e> me to get money in the future. <and in> That way, I would help our family to get out of poverty.

I really don't want to marry with a man that I don't know and even less just for a dowry. There are things that money can't buy: and love is one of them.

Moreover, we would be very unhappy not to be abble to spend our youth with our family and beeing free.

I don't need <no>anything, just to continue as I am: <spending> living my youth and studying. I'm just 14, don't forget it.

So please, please, I want to continue my studies and live<ing> with you.

Merci beaucoup et a bientôt.

* Attention à éviter les "phrases à rallonge" !

* Attention à éviter la double négation qui s'annule. Soit tu dis I don't need anything, soit I need nothing, mais pas un mélange des deux .

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Merci beaucoup