Besoin D'une Correction Svp

[Proton]

J'ai un petit exposé à faire. Voici ma traduction en anglais. (qui faudrait me corriger svp)!

Sydney is the most populous city in Australia, with a metropolitan area population of approximately 4.28 million. It is the state capital of New South Wales. Sydney is the most important financial center of Australia, as well as the international tourist destination, known today for its beaches and its two main monuments: the Opera and the Harbour Bridge. Sydney is a city established around a bay which can welcome 10.000 boats.

Geography

Sydney is in a coastal basin bordered by the Pacific Ocean to the east, the Blue Mountains to the west, the Hawkesbury River to the north and the Royal National Park to the south. Sydney is on a coast where the level of the ocean rose and flooded profound valleys. The Sydney Statistical Division, used for census data, is the unofficial metropolitan area and covers 12,145 km².

Climate

Sydney has a temperate climate with warm summers and mild winters, with rainfall spread throughout the year. The weather is moderated by proximity to the ocean, and more extreme temperatures are recorded in the inland western suburbs. Although the city does not suffer from cyclones.

Urban structure

There is a strong concentration of skyscraper and the other buildings. Sydney CBD is limited in the East by a series of parks and public gardens.

Demographics

At the time of the 2006 census, there were 4,119,190 residents present in the Sydney. The three major sources of immigrants are England, China and New Zealand.

Qui signifie:

Sydney est aujourd'hui le plus important centre financier d'Australie, ainsi qu'une destination touristique internationale, connue pour ses plages et ses deux monuments principaux : l'Opéra et le Harbour Bridge. Sydney est une cité établie autour d'une baie qui peut accueillir 10.000 bateaux.

Géographie :

Sydney se trouve sur un littoral où le niveau de l’océan est monté et a inondé de profondes vallées. L'agglomération de Sydney s'étend sur près de 12 145 kilomètres carrés et comprend la côte centrale et les Montagnes bleues, ainsi que des parcs nationaux et d'autres zones non urbanisées.

Climat :

Sydney possède un climat tempéré avec un hiver doux et plus de 340 jours d'ensoleillement.

Structure urbaine :

L’agglomération de Sydney est formellement divisée en plus de 300 quartiers pour l'adressage postal. Il y a une forte concentration de gratte-ciel et d'autres bâtiments. Sydney CBD est limité à l’est par une série de parcs et jardins publics.

Démographie :

La population en 2006 était de 4 284 379 habitants. Les trois pays immigrants majeures sont L’Angleterre, la chine et la nouvelle zélande.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Sydney is the most populous city in Australia, with a metropolitan area population of approximately 4.28 million. It is the state capital of New South Wales. Sydney is the most important financial center of Australia, as well as the international tourist destination, known today for its beaches and its two main monuments: the Opera and the Harbour Bridge. Sydney is a city established around a bay which can welcome 10.000 boats.

Geography

Sydney is in a coastal basin bordered by the Pacific Ocean to the east, the Blue Mountains to the west, the Hawkesbury River to the north and the Royal National Park to the south. Sydney is on a coast where the level of the ocean rose and flooded deep valleys. The Sydney Statistical Division, used for census data, is the unofficial metropolitan area and covers 12,145 km².

Climate

Sydney has a temperate climate with warm summers and mild winters, with rainfall spread throughout the year. The weather is moderated by proximity to the ocean, and more extreme temperatures are recorded in the inland western suburbs. Although the city does not suffer from cyclones.

Urban structure

There is a strong concentration of skyscrapers and <the> other buildings. Sydney CBD is limited in the East by a series of parks and public gardens.

Demographics

At the time of the 2006 census, there were 4,119,190 residents present in <the> Sydney. The three major sources of immigrants are England, China and New Zealand.

Very good job!

[Proton]

Merci beaucoup! Voici la suite! (besoin d'une nouvelle correction svp)!

Education

Sydney is the seat of some of the universities the most known for Australia. There are also four TAFE institutions (Technical and Further Education) financed by the state of New South Wales, in charge of(loaded with) the education and the formation(training) of the adults at an equivalent level at the beginning of the university studies. Sydney welcomes public, confessional and private schools. The public schools, including nursery schools and special schools are administered by the department of the education and the formation of the New South Wales.

Culture :

A part of the Australian culture is the aboriginal population. This one lives put off in the rain forest on the West and in the center of Australia. But the aborigines sometimes come in city to make dances in the street. Sydney has several popular museums. The biggest are the Australian Museum (natural history and anthropology), the Powerhouse Museum (science, technology and design), the Art Gallery of New South Wales, the Museum of Contemporary Art and the Australian National Maritime Museum.

Art and Activities:

Sydney has a big variety of cultural sites and institutions. The Opera of Sydney possesses 5 rooms used for varied cultural representations. The Sydney Opera House was classified in the World heritage of the Humanity by UNESCO during his transfer 2007. Numerous festivals take place in Sydney, notably on popular "Shrove Tuesday", gay pride taking place on Oxford Street. There is numerous national parks (Park National Royal, Kuring-gai Chase National Park, Blue Mountains National Park) presents on the town of Sydney. In approximately 30 km of the city center, they form a green belt around the metropolis. The sunset is particularly interesting to see since the south part. Botany Bay National Park is in a situation similar to the entrance of the bay of Botany, or James Cook was the first European to get the Australian earth. We find a rocky coast very wild.

The famous beach of Jumped up, situated east of the city and in seven kilometres of the city center, is easy of access by the train or the public transportation. She(it) is especially considered as her(its) fine sand and her(its) rollers. There is a possibility of going windsurfing there.

The rocks:

It is the the oldest district of Sydney, the batiments first ones built in 1788 are in stoneware where from the name of The Rocks. Originally, he was frequented by the sailors and the prostitutes, then at the end of 1800s by gangs. Several projects of reconstruction were begun, stopped by both world wars. Under the pressure of the local residents, former buildings were able to be kept and restored. The district is now a tourist place, known for his market which is opened all the weekends and for his pubs and souvenir shops.

qui veut dire:

Education :

Sydney est le siège de certaines des universités les plus connues d'Australie. Il existe également quatre institutions TAFE (Technical and Further Education) financées par l’état de Nouvelle-Galles du Sud, chargées de l’éducation et la formation des adultes à un niveau équivalent au début des études universitaires. Sydney accueille des écoles publiques, confessionnelles et privées. Les écoles publiques, y compris les maternelles et les écoles spéciales sont administrées par le département de l'enseignement et de la formation de la Nouvelle-Galles du Sud.

Culture :

Une partie de la culture australienne est la population aborigène. Celle-ci vit reculée dans la forêt tropicale à l'Ouest et au centre de l'Australie. Mais les aborigènes viennent parfois en ville pour faire des danses dans la rue.

Art et Loisir :

Sydney a une grande variété de sites et institutions culturels. L'Opéra de Sydney possède 5 salles utilisées pour des représentations culturelles variées. The Sydney Opera House fut classé au Patrimoine Mondial de l'Humanité par l'UNESCO lors de sa cession 2007. De nombreux festivals se déroulent à Sydney, notamment le populaire "Mardi gras", gay pride se déroulant sur Oxford Street.

Il y a de nombreux parcs nationaux (Park National Royal, Kuring-gai Chase National Park, Blue Mountains National Park) présents sur l'agglomération de Sydney. À environ 30 km du centre de la ville, ils forment une ceinture verte autour de la métropole. Le coucher de soleil est particulièrement intéressant à voir depuis la partie sud.

Le Botany Bay National Park se trouve dans une situation similaire à l'entrée de la baie de Botany, ou James Cook fut le premier Européen à toucher la terre Australienne. On trouve une côte rocheuse très sauvage.

La célèbre plage de Bondi, située à l'Est de la ville et à sept kilomètres du centre ville, est facile d'accès par le train ou les transports en commun. Elle est surtout réputée pour son sable fin et ses rouleaux. Il y a la possibilité d'y faire du surf.

The Rocks :

C'est le quartier le plus ancien de Sydney, les premiers batiments construits en 1788 sont en grès d'où le nom de The Rocks. A l'origine, il était fréquenté par les marins et les prostituées, puis à la fin des années 1800 par des gangs. Plusieurs projets de reconstruction ont été entrepris, stoppés par les deux guerres mondiales. Sous la pression des habitants du quartier, des bâtiments anciens ont pu être conservés et restaurés. Le quartier est maintenant un lieu touristique, connu pour son marché qui est ouvert toutes les fins de semaine et pour ses pubs et magasins de souvenirs.

[Jean B]

Je ne peux pas croire que c'est la même personne qui a écrit ce qui suit tant ça pullule de fautes grossières.

Pour tout dire, j'ai la conviction que ce n'est que le résultat d'un traducteur en ligne.

Si c'est vraiment le cas, c'est déplorable car je déteste qu'on trompe ma confiance et qu'on me prenne pour un demeuré.

Dans ces conditions, je ne me vois pas continuer à perdre mon temps pour corriger une machine parfaitement stupide.

A bon entendeur...

Education

Sydney is the seat of some of the most well known universities <the most well known> for Australia. There are also four TAFE institutions (Technical and Further Education) financed by the state of New South Wales, in charge of <(loaded with)> the education and the <formation> training of <the> adults at an equivalent level at the beginning of the university studies. Sydney welcomes public, confessional and private schools. The public schools, including nursery schools and special schools are administered by the department of <the> education and <the formation> training of <the> New South Wales.

Culture :

A part of the Australian culture is the result of the aboriginal population. This one lives <put off> out-of-the-way in the rain forest on the West and in the center of Australia. But <the> aborigines sometimes come in the city to make dances in the street. Sydney has several popular museums. The biggest are the Australian Museum (natural history and anthropology), the Powerhouse Museum (science, technology and design), the Art Gallery of New South Wales, the Museum of Contemporary Art and the Australian National Maritime Museum.

Art and Activities:

Sydney has a big variety of cultural sites and institutions. The Opera of Sydney possesses 5 <rooms> halls used for varied cultural <representations> performances. The Sydney Opera House was classified in the World heritage of <the> Humanity by the UNESCO during <his transfer> its 2007 session. Numerous festivals take place in Sydney, notably on popular "Shrove Tuesday", gay pride taking place on Oxford Street. There <is> are numerous national parks (Park National Royal, Kuring-gai Chase National Park, Blue Mountains National Park) <presents> in the town of Sydney. <In> At approximately 30 km <of> from the city center, they form a green belt around the metropolis. The sunset is particularly interesting to see <since> from the south part. Botany Bay National Park is in a situation similar to the entrance of the bay of Botany <or> where James Cook was the first European to <get the Australian earth> land. We find a very wild rocky coast <very wild>.

The famous beach of <Jumped up> Bondi, situated east of the city and <in> seven kilometres <of> from the city center, is easily <of> accessed by <the> train or the public transportation. <She> It is especially <considered as her> renowned for its fine sand and <her> its rollers. There is a possibility of going windsurfing there.

The rocks:

It is the the oldest district of Sydney. The <batiments> first <ones> buildings erected in 1788 are in <stoneware> sandstone <where from> hence the name <of The Rocks>. Originally, <he> it was frequented by <the> sailors and <the> prostitutes, then at the end of the 1800s by gangs. Several projects of reconstruction were begun, stopped by both world wars. Under the pressure of the local residents, former buildings <were able to> could be kept and restored. The district is now a tourist place, known for <his> its market which is opened all <the> weekends and for <his> its pubs and souvenir shops.

[Proton]

Désolé, ma soeur n'a pas attendu que je l'aide. En tout cas merci d'avoir corrigé!