Corriger Un Texte?

[Cnédienne]

Rebonjour.

Je suis désolée de vous redéranger.

J'ai écris un texte en anglais et je voudrais que quelqu'un me le corrige s'il est possible.

Merci:

When I was ten years old, I start to get interested in reading books, and also BDs.

Now, I still like reading, I have more than 70 books at home, most of them are about mistery, fiction, history and also romance.

I have to say that, read is one of my favourite activities in my free time.

But I also do others activities, like playing piano, or guitarre, and even doing equitation.

So, Yes, I thing that I'm a regular reader, i read between 1 and 3 books a week, depending on time that I have and also in how many homeworks I've got to do. I love read, about everything.

But books that I prefere are some kind of Harry Potters's saga for example and even others like Captain Blood or "the lost continent".

For me, reading is not just like anothers activities, is not just to take a book and read what it's write on him.

For me, reading is like, leave the world where I live everyday to get into another one, a new one, where there can be magicians, criminals, or simply the story of a live.

Every book speak about differents things, they were created about they author's imagination.

Not just for a pastime, but in order to make us dream.

Merciiiii

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Tu n'as pas à t'excuser parce que tu postes un sujet.

Le forum est fait pour ça et chacun est entièrement libre de répondre ou pas.

When I was ten years old, I started <preterit) to get interested in reading books, and also <BDs> comic strips.

Now, I still like reading, I have more than 70 books at home, most of them are about mystery, fiction, history and also romance.

I have to say that, reading <(nom verbal sujet du verbe d'état suivant) is one of my favourite activities in my free time.

But I also do other<s> <(adjectif = invariable) activities, like playing the piano, or the guitar<re>, and even <doing equitation> horse-riding.

So, Yes, I think that I'm a regular reader, I read between 1 and 3 books a week, depending on the time (that) I have and also on how many much homework<s> <(plutôt indénombrable) I've got to do. I love reading <(nom verbal COD du verbe précédent) about everything.

But the books (that) I prefer<e> are some kind of Harry Potters's saga for example and even others like Captain Blood or "the lost continent".

For me, reading is not just like another<s> <(singulier) activity, it is not just to take a book and read what <it'> <(pas de double sujet en anglais) is written<(participe passé irrégulier) in <him> it.<(objet = pronom neutre)

For me, reading is like leaving the world where I live everyday to get into another one, a new one, where there can be magicians, criminals, or simply the story of a life.

Every book speaks <(sujet singulier = S au verbe) about different<s> <(adjectif = invariable, bis !) things. They were created <about> thanks to <(= grâce à) the author's imagination, not just <for> as a pastime, but in order to make us dream.

Pas mal du tout.

[Cnédienne]

Mercie beaucoup JRB.

[Jean B]

Mercie beaucoup JRB.