Home School

[chieuzzeuh]

Bonjour à tous ,

Voilà j'ai un devoir d'anglais (logique) que j'aimerai qu'on me corrige car l'anglais et moi on est pas super ami ^^

Question : If you were given the choice, would you consider home schooling ? Why or why not?

Réponse ^^ : I think when you work at home they are advantage and disadvantage. Advantages are : you can wake-up at hour what you want, you can travel and follow the lesson and if you are sick , handicap you can work at home wihtout go to the school. When you work at home you can take a time for the lesson that you don't understand. Now the disadvantage : when you work at home, you don't have friends, you can't divide joys of the highschool ! A child who work at home don't know what is comply with the rules [ Ne sais pas se que s'est de respecter un réglement]...

I think if I have the choice between work in my house and in the school , I'll choose school because it's here where my friends are. I can create links with other people and puppils. I think when a child work at home is as isolate. For work at home il faut be determined and conscientious.

Bon je n'avais pas trop d'inspiration à vrai dire, donc merci à ceux ou celles qui pourront me corriger ^^

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

I think <when you work at home> there are both advantages and disadvantages when you work at home.

<Advantages are :> On the one hand, you can wake up at <hour> whatever time you want, you can travel and still follow the lesson. And <if> in case you are sick or handicapped you can work <at> from home without going to <the> school. When you work at home you can take a longer time for the lesson that you don't understand.

<Now the disadvantage :> On the other hand, when you work at home, you don't have friends, you can't <divide> share the joys of <the> highschool! A child who works at home doesn't know what it is to comply with <the> rules. [ Ne sait pas ce que c'est de respecter un règlement]...

<I think> If I had the choice between work in my house and <in the> at school, I think I'<ll>d choose school because it's here where my friends are. I can create links with other people and pupils. <I think> When a child works at home, <is as> I believe he isolates himself. <For> To work at home <il faut> you must be determined and conscientious.

* Apprends à construire tes phrases logiquement.

Exemple à éviter : "Je pense, quand..."

Soit tu commences ta phrase par la subordonnée, soit par la principale mais ne les intercale pas l'une dans l'autre comme tu le fais.

C'est ton principal défaut dont il faut te débarrasser au plus vite.

Repère bien les autres fautes, il y en a qui sont inadmissibles, afin de ne plus les refaire.