Corrections De Texte Svp

[zivalouna]

Bonjour, j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour me corriger SVP, voici le texte:

The poster, published on the WWT, aims to raise awareness on global warming. We see a polar bear "SDF" rendered by the fact that the ice caps on which he lives has already begun no longer existed.

Global warming is due to the high rate of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. According to expert estimates, rising temperatures could result in the disappearance of some plant and animal species, an increase in extreme weather events, rising sea levels and could also have serious repercussions in terms of health.

To solve this problem, we must respond and take action to halt global warming.

Je vous remercie d'avance! A bientôt!

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

The poster, published on the WWT, aims <to> at raising peoples's awareness on global warming. We can see a homeless/roaming polar bear <"SDF"> rendered by the fact that the ice cap<s> on which he lives has already begun to disappear. <no longer existed.>

Global warming is due to the high rate of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. According to expert estimates, rising temperatures could result in the disappearance of some plant and animal species, an increase in extreme weather events, rising sea levels and could also have serious repercussions in terms of health.

To solve this problem, we must respond and take action to halt global warming.

Je vous remercie d'avance! A bientôt!

[zivalouna]

Merci beaucoup pour votre aide! A bientôt!

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup pour votre aide! A bientôt!