pitich0u Posté(e) le 13 février 2008 Signaler Posté(e) le 13 février 2008 bonsoir ! je sais qu'il est tard et que je m'y prend vraiment a la derniere minute, mais qui ne tente rien n'a rien. j'ai un dialogue a écrire entre deux personnages d'un texte que l'on a eu en controle. je l'ai fait sauf que ma connaissant, et connaissant surtout mon niveau en anglais, je suis sure a presque 99.99% d'avoir beaucoup de fautes ... si vous pouviez m'aider a corriger tout ca ce serait vraiment gentil, je dois le rendre demain après midi :s Vincent : Uncle Turlough, which pleasure to see you! How are you ? Barbara and me are very happy to meet you at last ! Uncle Turlough : very well, thank you, but address us as ‘tu’, we are the same blood after all. I am delighted to see you so after all this time, and you too Barbara of course ! [ Barbara greeted Uncle Turlough and withdrew to leave men between them]. Vincent : let go to the lounge, we shall be more feel at ease to speak. Uncle Turlough : I see that you are installed well. Then, how find you America? You don’t regret Ireland? Vincent : yes, with Barbara we wanted to feel at home as quickly as possible. I find this is a sublime country, people are nice and friendly, and I find very enriching to discover finally America with its culture, its history, its customs ... I am very happy to be here and, honestly, Ireland doesn’t miss me. Uncle Turlough : I am delighted for you, that you are happy and feel here as to you. Then like that, you like writing ?! Say me all ! Vincent : as you, I am mad about literature! You are a real model for me ! You which is recognized for your poems and your taste for the beautiful words, I dreamed power follow the same road as you ! Uncle Turlough : I am hampered but at the same time affected and happy to see somebody of my own family sharing the same passion with me! You know, to be writer doesn’t allow to win always a lot of money, nor to know the celebrity. Moreover, we always keep the fear in us that people grow tired of what we make. If I can give you some advice, try to realize your dream, and if it’s neither for the money nor The celebrity, made for your passion. While leaving this principle to make share what we like with persons whom we do not know that we have everything has to win in the life. Vincent : thank you for these invaluable advice, and do not make it to you for it: the money and the celebrity does not attract(entice) me, what I wish it’s to make what I like and I think that never I could regret this decision if one day I reached there. [ Barbara arrived in the lounge] Barbara : Uncle Turlough, do you want to stay dinner with us ? You will have so all the time to speak around a good meal. Uncle Turlough : I thank you Barbara, it would be with pleasure ! j'espere vraiment que vous pourrez m'aider. je vous remercie d'avance bonne soirée
pitich0u Posté(e) le 14 février 2008 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 14 février 2008 personne pour m'aider ? je me suis deja trouvée quelques erreurs, mais je doute que ce soit les seules :s aidez moi svp !
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 14 février 2008 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 14 février 2008 personne pour m'aider ? je me suis deja trouvée quelques erreurs, mais je doute que ce soit les seules :s aidez moi svp !
pitich0u Posté(e) le 14 février 2008 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 14 février 2008 effectivement, trop tard d'une heure ^^ mais merci quand meme bonne journée
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