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[oliverte2001]

1- I was sleeping in a bed gave by ma grandmother

2- I have juste dreamed that i was playing with lots of animals

3- I've never seen a so beautiful cat

3- It's for your birthday

4- She knew that I always wanted an animal to play with

5- It was one of the best moment of my life

6- However, she insisted on the fact that I will have to look after it

7- It was a test who permitted me growing en becoming an adult fastly

[mxtine]

here some corrections, I hope it is not too late for you.

good luck

mxtine

&- I was sleeping in a bed given by my grandmother

2- I have just dreamt that I was playing with lots of animals

3- I've never seen such a beautiful cat

3- It's for your birthday

4- She knew that I always wanted an animal to play with

5- It was one of the best moments of my life

6- However, she insisted on the fact that I will have to look after it

7- It was a test that permitted me to grow and become faster an adult

[cactusjo]

1- I was sleeping in a bed gIVEN by ma grandmother

2- I have just dreamT that i was playing with lots of animals

3- I've never seen SUCH A  beautiful cat

3- It's for your birthday

4- She knew that I HAD always wanted an animal to play with

5- It was one of the best moment of my life

6- However, she insisted on the fact that I WOULD  have to look after it

7- It was a test whICH  permitted ( ALLOWED ) :roll: me TO grow AND becomE an adult fastly