bip Posté(e) le 15 février 2005 Signaler Posté(e) le 15 février 2005 Bonjour J'ai du faire une dissert en anglais dont voici le sujet : Do you think that childhood experiences are the only determining factors in what a person will be as an adult ? Pourriez-vous SVP corriger mes fautes ? Merci d'avance. To my mind, chilhood experiences are the ground of an adult. I think that an adult will educate his children as he was educated. If a child lived with traumas, his life will be affected. Similarly, if parents get divorced, it's bacause they didn't love each other, and the fruit of their love (their child) become a kind of "foreigner" for the rest of his family. Both parents wants him, and he needs each one, but he has to choose. Going with his mother or with his father ? The one certainly brings love, but she could be too much possessive and destabilize the child, the other usually must be too cool, and could not define the basis of a perfect childhood.Each point of view can be developped ; nevertheless, the great looser is the child. Divided into two parts - his mother and his father -, what can he choose ? Both are unperfect, but what a great thing it was when the parents were unified, they brought a sort of light to their child, they could give him a confortable future. Now, he his alone in the dark, and this will affect him. He had no really love, no really family, and so he doesn't want the best for his children : he hates life ! On the contrary, a happy child who growns in a good childhood can not always be a super-parent, but he might be so. As he was a child, his parents wanted the best for him and wanted that he gets the best : a marvelous car and a wonderful job which brings him lots of money and could assure the future. Thus, it's normal that he will that for his child. One generation helps one, and the one helps the other. A positive state of mind in the house, and you get the happiest children of the world! To conclude, I think that childhood experiences are the basis of the future life. We can compare them to the ground of a house, the rest of the house being the adults experiences. Par ailleurs, que pensez-vous de mes arguments ? Merci beaucoup
bip Posté(e) le 22 février 2005 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 22 février 2005 Bonjour Est-ce que personne n'a envie de corriger mon travail. Je dois bientôt le rendre. Merci de votre aide précieuse. Help, help....
bip Posté(e) le 27 février 2005 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 27 février 2005 Bonjour Ma rédac n'a toujours pas été corrigée, j'attends de vos nouvelles. Dans l'urgence parce que demain ce sera trop tard........................ Aidez-moi SVP.
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