E-Bahut didi36 Posté(e) le 4 novembre 2004 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 4 novembre 2004 Salut! J'ai fait une rédaction en anglais et ça serait vraiment sympa si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger mes erreurs.Je préviens d'abord que je suis nulle en anglais alors ne vous moquez pas trop de moi en lisant!Merci! Voici le sujet(pas terrible d'ailleur!):"Do you think that "nothing is bigger than life?" I think that "nothing is bigger than life" because without the life,nothing is possible.Nothing is comparable to the life.Without it,we would not be there.Moreover,to give the life,isn't it a big thing?The life is something of formidable, it enables us to make full with extraordinary things. We are surrounded of full with alive things.The life, it is not that the being human, there is also it vegetable, the animals, the microbes... The life is magic. For example, in certain desert areas, it is enough to a stormy shower so that nature takes again the top.The vegetation reappears, from the animals come to be nourished some, be watered in the marres formed by the rain.Doesn't that prove that the life is strongest? Because it is enough to a little water so that the life reappears. Only death puts a term at all that.Very ended up dying one day but the life always takes again the top. It is a continuity. But death can be as stronger as the life because it is enough to a great cataclysm so that the Earth and the life which it carries is destroyed. But death supplements the life, it is a vicious circle which will end only when the life is not any more. Thus,"nothing is bigger than life". Je sais,c'est un peu puéril mais pour faire 250 mots la dessus,c'est dur! Merci d'avance pour votre aide!
SamuraiTofu Posté(e) le 4 novembre 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 4 novembre 2004 Salut! J'ai fait une rédaction en anglais et ça serait vraiment sympa si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger mes erreurs.Je préviens d'abord que je suis nulle en anglais alors ne vous moquez pas trop de moi en lisant!Merci! Voici le sujet(pas terrible d'ailleur!):"Do you think that "nothing is bigger than life?" I think that "nothing is bigger than life" because without the life,nothing is possible.Nothing is comparable to the life.Without it,we would not be there.Moreover,to give the life,isn't it a big thing?The life is something of formidable, it enables us to make full with extraordinary things. We are surrounded of full with alive things.The life, it is not that the being human, there is also it vegetable, the animals, the microbes... The life is magic. For example, in certain desert areas, it is enough to a stormy shower so that nature takes again the top.The vegetation reappears, from the animals come to be nourished some, be watered in the marres formed by the rain.Doesn't that prove that the life is strongest? Because it is enough to a little water so that the life reappears. Only death puts a term at all that.Very ended up dying one day but the life always takes again the top. It is a continuity. But death can be as stronger as the life because it is enough to a great cataclysm so that the Earth and the life which it carries is destroyed. But death supplements the life, it is a vicious circle which will end only when the life is not any more. Thus,"nothing is bigger than life". Je sais,c'est un peu puéril mais pour faire 250 mots la dessus,c'est dur! Merci d'avance pour votre aide! <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
E-Bahut didi36 Posté(e) le 5 novembre 2004 Auteur E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 5 novembre 2004 Merci beaucoup! Je suis en TS,pourquoi?
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