Expression Anglais

[coralie]

coucou j'ai l'expression du sujet 2 du bac à faire (voir un peu plus bas dans le forum pour voir l'adresse du site où se trouve le texte)

Je me suis beaucoup inspiré de bt4 -> voir un peu plus bas dans le même forum(tu m'excusera mais je n'avais pas beaucoup d'idée et ton devoir était bien je trouve).

merci de m'aider. Si vous trouvez un vocabulaiure un peu plus adéquat pourriez vous me l'indiquer aussi svp (ça m'évitera les répétitions par exemple) merci d'avance

Without communication, people can't be happy. They have always needed to communicate, but today, this need is more important. So, why the need of communicate grow today ?

First, it’s more easy than yesterday to communicate : indeed, new way of communication appeared : Internet, cellular téléphone… Now, everybody are hurried and busy, so they haven’t time to write a letter for example. New way of communication are quick and easy. It’s very useful to converse with friends who live far from us : people can be connected with everyone, everywhere in the world.

Moreover, to communicate permit to express our feelings. During adolescence, we have needed to communicate whith other people to help us, to understand us, to comfort us… New styles of communication are quick, so internet and cellular phone are a good way for teenager to communicate. For example, in text And Justice There Is None from Deborah Crombie, the little girl are happy to have news West Indians neighbours, so she wants absolutely to say it at her father.

Nevertheless, I think that the news way of communications have too desavantages :

Internet and the cellular phone can be considered as drugs and people can become sometimes addicted.

To conclude, now, the need of communication is more important and different, but it’s to consume with moderation ! ! !

[mxtine]

Without communication, people can't be happy. They have always needed to communicate, but today, this need is more important. So, why does the need of communicate grow today ?

First, it’s easier than yesterday to communicate : indeed, new ways of communication appeared : Internet, cellular telephone… Now, everybody is in a hurry or busy, so nobody has time to write a letter, for example. New ways of communication are quick and easy. It’s very useful to converse with friends who live far from us : people can be connected with everyone, everywhere in the world.

Moreover, communicate permits to express our feelings. During adolescence, we needed to communicate with other people to help us, understand us, comfort us… New styles of communication are quick, so Internet and cellular phone are good ways for teenager to communicate. For example, in text And Justice There Is None from Deborah Crombie, the little girl es happy to have news from West Indians neighbours, so she wants absolutely say it to her father.

Nevertheless, I think that the new ways of communication have desavantages, too : Internet and the cellular phone can be considered as drugs and people can sometimes become addicted.

To conclude, the need of communication is more important and different, but it’s to be consumed with moderation ! ! !