Pouvez Corrigez Mon Paragraphe Svp ?

[Neyla]

slt j'ai fé un paragraphe sur les information a la télé pouvez vs me corriger svp? Merci d'avance.

The news tell to us with the current (nous mettent au courant)various events which proceed in the world. These events can be sporty(sportive), cultural, political and economic. Let us take (prenons)the example of the events of September 11 2001 in the United States. It is thanks to television and with the current events that one could see on line how the second plane was crushed on one of the twin towers for example. It is always thanks to the news that we are well-informed from what occurs to the Middle-East, to Africa, to Asia etc.So the informations are really important to know the recent events which proceed on our planet.