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[ArthurBd]

Bonjour,

Je voulais savoir si quelqu'un pouvais me corriger mes fautes sur le texte ci-dessous :

Merci d'avance!


Firstly, I can explain you quickly the rules of this sport. Then, I will speak about Irish Rugby in Ireland and in Europe. Finally, I will speak about the flag, the hymn and the stadium of the national team.

Two teams compete for two halves of 40 minutes. Each team of 15 players on the field. The goal is to get more points than his opponent at the end of the match. We can score points by flattening the ball past the posts. This is equivalent to 5 points. Otherwise you can pass the ball between the posts, which is equivalent to 3 points.
Rugby has been played in Ireland since at least 1854 when the first club, at Trinity College in Dublin, was established. The governing body, the Irish Rugby Football Union (IRFU), was formed in 1874.

The large professional teams in Ireland, essentially one in each of the provinces Munster, Leinster, Ulster and Connaught, primarily concentrate on the Heineken Cup, this is equivalent to Champions League football and the Magners League, which are European competitions, rather than on competitions within Ireland.
Magners League is a championship with teams from Ireland, Scotland, Italy and Wales.
The Rugby Union is a major sport in Ireland. However, it is widely anticipated by the Gaelic sports and football. It is practiced by about environ about 86 500 persons in Ireland.

Rugby has a strong academic tradition. As the most famous rugby school in Ireland is that of Blackrock College in Dublin . Great players of Irish rugby like Brian O'Driscoll, Gordon d’Arcy, Tommy Bowe was at this school when they were young.

In April 1995, Philip Coulter, created a hymn for the Irsh Team : the Ireland's Call. Before, this hymn, the team had two hymn. When they received in Belfast the hymn was God Save the Queen (the national hymn of England) and when they played in Dublin, the hymn was Amhrán na bhFiann (it’s the national hymn of Ireland). But the Federation of Irish Rugby decided to create another hymn to gather the nationalist and the unionist.

When the national team plays, not the national flag like others countries. But the flag which is deployed it’s a flag with the symbols of the four provinces. The federation has decided that because the national team includes Ireland and Northern Ireland.

The national team play in Stadium called Aviva Stadium since 2007. Before, she played in a same place but in another Stadium Lansdowne Road. The federation decided to destroy this Stadium to create another with more places and more design. So, in 2007, Aviva Stadium was born. ArthurBd Petit nouveau Messages: 1 Inscription: 30 Jan 2012, 02:05 Emploi: Etudiant Ville: Dublin

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[JRB]

Bonjour,

ArthurBd, le 30 janvier 2012 - 00:16, dit :

Bonjour,

Je voulais savoir si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger mes fautes sur le texte ci-dessous :

Merci d'avance !

Firstly, I can quickly explain to you quickly what the rules of this sport are. Then, I will speak about Irish Rugby in Ireland and in Europe. Finally, I will speak about the flag, the hymn and the stadium of the national team.

Two teams compete for during two halves of 40 minutes. Each team of 15 players play on the field.

Sans verbe, il n'y a pas de phrase.

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The goal is to get more points than his one's opponent at the end of the match.

L'adjectif possessif s'accorde en genre avec le possesseur, pas avec la chose possédée. Ici, j'ai choisi le mode impersonnel.

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We can score points by flattening the ball past the posts. This is equivalent to 5 points. Otherwise you can pass the ball between the posts, which is equivalent to 3 points and is called a drop goal.
Rugby has been played in Ireland since at least 1854 when the first club, at Trinity College in Dublin, was established. The governing body, the Irish Rugby Football Union (IRFU), was formed in 1874.

The large big professional teams in Ireland, essentially one in each of the provinces Munster, Leinster, Ulster and Connaught, primarily concentrate on the Heineken Cup, this is equivalent to football Champions League football and the Magners League, which are European competitions, rather than on competitions within Ireland.
Magners League is a championship with teams from Ireland, Scotland, Italy and Wales.
The Rugby Union is a major sport in Ireland. However, it is widely anticipated surpassed/outmatched by the Gaelic sports and football. It is practised by about environ about 86 500 persons in Ireland.

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Rugby has a strong academic tradition. As the most famous rugby school in Ireland is that of Blackrock College in Dublin . Great players of Irish rugby like Brian O'Driscoll, Gordon d’Arcy, Tommy Bowe was at  attended this school when they were young.

Il ne t'aura pas échappé, du moins je l'espère, que le verbe s'accorde en nombre avec le sujet.

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In April 1995, Philip Coulter, created a hymn for the Irsh Team : the Ireland's Call. Before this hymn, the team had two (hymns). When they received in Belfast the hymn was God Save the Queen (the national hymn of England) and when they played in Dublin, the hymn was Amhrán na bhFiann (it’s the national hymn of Ireland). But the Federation of Irish Rugby decided to create another hymn to gather the nationalists and the unionists.

When the national team plays,  not the national flag like others countries. But the flag which is deployed unfurled it’s a flag with is not the national one but one that displays the symbols of the four provinces. The federation has decided that because the national team includes ÉIRE/the Republic of Ireland and Ulster/Northern Ireland.

The national team play have been playing in the stadium called Aviva Stadium since 2007. Before, she they played in a same place but in another stadium, Lansdowne Road. The federation decided to destroy this stadium to build/create another one with more places seats and a more modern/ better design. So in 2007, Aviva Stadium was born. ArthurBd Petit nouveau Messages: 1 Inscription: 30 Jan 2012, 02:05 Emploi: Etudiant Ville: Dublin
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Profite de ton séjour à Dublin pour rafraîchir tes connaissances de la grammaire de l'anglais.

[ArthurBd]

Merci pour cette correction.