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[beubeu]

Bonsoir , j'ai eu à faire une biographie sur Elvis Presley ces vacances et j'aurai voulu que vous me corriger mes fautes d'orthographe s'il vous plait . N'ayant pas un grand niveaux un anglais . Cordialement Benoit



Elvis Aaron Presley as « The King » was born inJanuary, 8th, 1935 in Tupelo, Mississippi. He was an only son. His parents were Gladys Love Smith and Vernon Elvis Presley. He grew up in a religious family which often goes at church. When he was eleven, his parents gave him a guitar as a present and he fascinated right away for blues which he listened to secret on the radio. He grew up to Tupelo to the age of thirteen years old. After that they moved to Memphis, a big city in Tennessee. When he finished the school, he quickly found a job at Crown Electricity Company as driver. Nevertheless he did dislike this job. During summer 1953, he recorded a 45 tours: My Happiness and Of That When Your Heartaches Begin to the Memphis Recording Service (siege of Sun Records) to give to his mother. In July, 1954, the producer of Sun Records, Sam Phillips, introduced Elvis to two local musicians.
King of the Rock and roll since the fifty’s, Elvis Presley also became famous in the cinema. He acted a scene in several movies (" Fights in King Creole " of Michael Curtiz) which were considered as his best movies.
Elvis died a natural death, on August 16th, 1977 found in his bathroom. President Jimmy Carter expressed feelings of millions persons when he said: Perhaps he’s gone but his legend will stay with us forever!!!!!!!
After his death in 1994, Forrest Gump the movie was directed. We can see Elvis playing guitar and sings in Forrest’s bedroom on the song HOUND DOG. The movie shows a pretty form of Elvis’s legs movements and swaying which would be inspired by Forrest. We can see it when Forrest’s Mother and him were walking on the street and pass past a TV and see the song that Elvis sang at the Forrest’s house and also his movements.

[Naya]

Bonjour,

beubeu, le 04 janvier 2012 - 21:20, dit :

Bonsoir , j'ai eu à faire une biographie sur Elvis Presley ces vacances et j'aurai voulu que vous me corriger mes fautes d'orthographe s'il vous plait . N'ayant pas un grand niveaux un anglais . Cordialement Benoit



Elvis Aaron Presley as (called) « The King » was born in (on) January, 8th, 1935 in Tupelo, Mississippi. He was an only son. His parents were Gladys Love Smith and Vernon Elvis Presley. He grew up in a religious family which often goes at church. When he was eleven, his parents gave him a guitar as a present and he fascinated right away for blues which he listened to secret on the radio. He grew up to (in) Tupelo to the age of thirteen years old. After that they moved to Memphis, a big city in Tennessee. When he finished the school, he quickly found a job at Crown Electricity Company as (a) driver. Nevertheless he did dislike this job. During summer 1953, he recorded a 45 tours: My Happiness and Of That When Your Heartaches Begin to the Memphis Recording Service (siege of Sun Records) to give to his mother. In July, 1954, the producer of Sun Records, Sam Phillips, introduced Elvis to two local musicians.
King of the Rock and roll since the fifty’s, Elvis Presley also became famous in the cinema. He acted a scene in several movies (" Fights in King Creole " of Michael Curtiz) which were considered as his best movies.
Elvis died a (from) natural death. On August 16th, 1977, he was found in his bathroom. President Jimmy Carter expressed feelings of millions persons when he said: Perhaps he’s gone but his legend will stay with us forever!!!!!!!
After his death in 1994, Forrest Gump the movie was directed. We can see Elvis playing guitar and sings in Forrest’s bedroom on the song HOUND DOG. The movie shows a pretty form of Elvis’s legs movements and swaying which would be inspired by Forrest. We can see it when Forrest’s Mother and him were walking on the street and pass past a TV and see the song that Elvis sang at the Forrest’s house and also his movements.

[JRB]

Bonjour,

Petits compléments à la prestation de Naya que je remercie pour son implication à offrir son aide sur le forum.

Naya, le 05 janvier 2012 - 13:15, dit :

Bonjour,

beubeu, le 04 janvier 2012 - 21:20, dit :

Bonsoir,
J'ai eu à faire une biographie sur Elvis Presley ces vacances et j'aurais voulu que vous me corrigiez mes fautes d'orthographe s'il vous plait . N'ayant pas un grand niveaux un anglais. Cordialement Benoit

Et en français, Benoit, ça va ?

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Elvis Aaron Presley as (called) « The King » was born in (on) January, 8th, 1935 in Tupelo, Mississippi. He was an only son. His parents were Gladys Love Smith and Vernon Elvis Presley. He grew up in a religious family which often goes went at to church. When he was eleven, his parents gave him a guitar as a present and he was fascinated right away for blues which he listened to secretly on the radio. He grew up to (in) Tupelo to the age of thirteen years old. After that Afterwards/Later they moved to Memphis, a big city in Tennessee. When he finished the school, he quickly found a job at Crown Electricity Company as (a) driver. Nevertheless he did dislike this job. During the summer 1953, he recorded a 45 tours single/forty-five: My Happiness and Of That When Your Heart aches Begin to the Memphis Recording Service (siege of Sun Records) to give to his mother. In July 1954, the producer of Sun Records, Sam Phillips, introduced Elvis to two local musicians.
King of the Rock and roll since the fifty’s fifties Elvis Presley also became famous as an actor/in the cinema industry. He acted a scene in several movies (" Fights in King Creole " of Michael Curtiz) which were considered as his best movies.
Elvis died a (from) natural death. On August 16th 1977, he was found in his bathroom. President Jimmy Carter expressed feelings of millions persons when he said: Perhaps he’s gone but his legend will stay with us forever!!!!!!!
After his death in 1994, Forrest Gump the movie was directed. We can see Elvis playing the guitar and sings singing in Forrest’s bedroom on to the song HOUND DOG. The movie shows a pretty form of Elvis’s legs movements and swaying which would be inspired by Forrest. We can see it when Forrest’s Mother and him were walking on the street and pass past a TV and see the song that Elvis sang at the Forrest’s house and also his movements.

Bonne continuation.

[beubeu]

Merci beaucoup !
Très bon forum qui m'a toujours aidé en maths et qui maintenant fait de même en anglais !

[JRB]

Avec plaisir et merci pour le compliment sur le forum.