Invité Geko20 Posté(e) le 2 janvier 2012 Signaler Posté(e) le 2 janvier 2012 Bonjour à tous, Alors voilà, je dois rédiger un essai dont le sujet sur lequel il faut débattre est : L'argent est source de bonheur. j'ai rédigé mon intro entièrement mais comme je suis loin d'être un as en anglais je fais appel a votre aide pour m'avertir si il y a des fautes de grammaire ... Merci d'avance In today's society, the incitement to opt for the cosumption, the moreand more present advertissements or famous people who make the headlines of women's magazines are only developp the fact that money give rise to hapiness. But being rich can be defined as many thinks : th ability to take care of your family, money helps one to lead more sophisticated (comfortable ?) life in society than an other person, having enough to never worry of his budget, be able to live with all the ressources which we wish. Does it necessarily means that money brings happiness ? In order to think about it, i will first consider the reasons why money is said to contribue to hapiness ; then , I will analyze why money is not always an exact sourceof hapiness as a old dicton said "Money can't buy hapiness "
Naya Posté(e) le 2 janvier 2012 Signaler Posté(e) le 2 janvier 2012 Bonjour à tous, Alors voilà, je dois rédiger un essai dont le sujet sur lequel il faut débattre est : L'argent est source de bonheur. j'ai rédigé mon intro entièrement mais comme je suis loin d'être un as en anglais je fais appel a votre aide pour m'avertir si il y a des fautes de grammaire ... Merci d'avance Bonjour, In today's society, the incitement to opt for the cosumption (consumption), the moreand (more and) more present advertissements (advertisements) or famous people who make the headlines of women's magazines are (is) only developp (developing) the fact that money give (gives) rise to hapiness (happiness). But being rich can be defined as many thinks (things) : the ability to take care of your family, money helps one to lead more sophisticated (comfortable?) life in society than an other (another) person, having enough to never worry of (about) his budget, be able to live with all the ressources (resources) which we wish. Does it necessarily means (mean) that money brings happiness? In order to think about it, i (I) will first consider the reasons why money is said to contribute to happiness ; then , I will analyze why money is not always an exact sourceof (source of) happiness as a (an) old dicton (saying) said (puts it) "Money can't buy hapiness (happiness) "
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