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[Tallula]

Bonjour,
Pouvez vous corriger ma rédaction?
Merci.


Would you say that nowadays education is less strict than it used to be some one hundred years ado ? Compare the virtues and drawback of harsh discipline to the virtues and drawbacks of today’s permissiveness?

I think,in fact, that education is now less strict than that of last year. I think there is pros and cons. From an early age, children are now too "put together" are too independent. Parents should sometimes be more strict with their children, to explain things. There are many more offenses (thefts, fights) between young people now than before. I think we must be strict, but too, leaving much freedom for children. Now the children do what they want or they want is to become almost anything. New technologies are, I think, as the cause of this authority not in recent years. Despite this, some children do not need a strict education to stay reasonable. Before, the outputs were limited, we did not know if we could go out with friends the next day, my grandma told me they did not know that 13 hours they were allowed to go to the movies at 15 hours. Now you can program the outputs of weeks in advance, which prevents some parents' authority. I think it's a shame, because education is important, and being less strict, they strike a part of education, which in addition should be a fun first.

[Tallula]

S'il vous plait j'ai des doutes, sur quelques formulations de phrases.
Votre aide est importante

[JRB]

Bonjour,

Tallula, le 02 janvier 2012 - 12:25, dit :

Would you say that nowadays education is less strict than it used to be some one hundred years ago? Compare the virtues and drawbacks of harsh discipline to the virtues and drawbacks of today’s permissiveness.

I think, in fact, that education is now less strict than that of last year.

C'est à croire que tu n'as pas lu le sujet ! Il t'est demandé de dire si l'éducation d'aujourd'hui est moins stricte qu'elle l'était il y a cent ans.

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I think there is pros and cons.

there is + singulier <---> there are + pluriel. C'est désespérant.

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From an early age, children are now too "put together" are too independent. Parents should sometimes be more strict with their children, to explain things. There are many more offenses (thefts, fights) between young people now than before. I think we must be strict, but too, also leaving let children have much freedom for children.

<Tu te contredis !

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Now the children do what they want or they want is to become almost anything.

<Ça ne veut rien dire.

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I think new technologies are, I think, as the cause of this authority not in recent years.

<Ça n'a pas de sens.

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Despite this, some children do not need a strict education to stay reasonable. Before, the outputs evenings out were limited, we did not know if we could go out with friends the next day, my grandma told me they did not know that 13 hours  at 1 pm if they were would be allowed to go to the movies at 15 hours 3 pm.

Même l'heure, tu ne sais pas la dire encore ?

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Now you can program plan the outputs of  your evenings out weeks in advance, which prevents<??? some parents' authority. I think it's a shame, because education is important, and being less strict, they strike<??? a part of education, which in addition should be a fun first.

C'est volontairement que je m'abstiendrai de tout commentaire supplémentaire sur la qualité de ce travail.