yuna-chan Posté(e) le 1 novembre 2011 Signaler Posté(e) le 1 novembre 2011 Bonjour vous pourrez corriger mon dialogue s'il vous plaie que j'ai fais avec tous ce que je savais This scene takes place at Brian's parents home. Banks informs his wife about the call he has just had with their son "Sandra you can come and sit down next to me please?I would like to talk about something".He says proudly . "Ok wait i come!!"She says loudly. "I am here!i am listening to you!"She says. "I spoke with our son today and he told me about the esult of his exam which is not very good"He says bitterly. "Realy!How has he got to his exam?She replys. "He...(hesitantly)he got a third"He says angrily. "What!! a third!! this is a very a very bad result"She says crossly. "Yeah I know darling,and he told me also that he would like to make a career in the music business"He adds. "He really said that?!I can not believe to my ears.When I think that I did everything for him not to become like you.If you had cared for him properly, who knows maybe he would have been more than that"She says loudly. "Like me!why you say that?!"He says crossly. "Like father,like son!After all you has not better at his age!I am not reason?" Banks in these words found nothing to say and and go away the living room. Cordialement !!
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 2 novembre 2011 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 2 novembre 2011 Bonjour, Bonjour, vous Pourriez-vous corriger mon dialogue s'il vous plaie plaît ? Je l'ai fait avec tout ce que je savais. This scene takes place at Brian's parents home. Banks informs his wife about the call he has just had with their son. "Sandra you can come and sit down next to me please? I would like to talk about something", he says proudly.
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