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[myrianis3]

Voilà, on a du inventer un dialogue pour deux personnes qui se rencontrent dans un train. Voici le mien et merci pour toute correction =)

-Sorry, is anyone sitting here?
-No, you can sit down. Are you going all the way to Paris?
-Yes, and you? Have you ever been to Paris?
-Me too. And no, it’s been the first time.
-I have been there several times. I travel a lot. For example, I have just got back to China. However, it’s the most awful country I’ve never visited. I prefer European Countries. And where do you come from?
-I come from China… and you? You are American, aren’t you?
-Oh, sorry…Yes, I’m. How did you guess?
-It’s because you have a little accent.
-Oh, I never realized it. Then… you come from China but how and why do you speak English?
-Oh, it’s complicated. In fact, I ran away my country 10 years ago because the life there was very difficult. However, I like my country.
-How terrible. Have you got the time please?
-Yes, I have. It’s practically five o’clock. We should arrive soon. (I hope)
-Then, are you married? Have you got children?
-No, I’m single and I don’t have children, because I work a lot and for me, it isn’t very important now, and you?
-I don’t have children and I’m looking for the good person. I got married but…
-What? You got divorced I presume.
-No, she died two months ago.
-I am sorry. That’s terrible.
-Never mind, don’t worry. This is the life and anyway, I couldn’t stand her. And what are you going to Paris for?
- To visit my sister and I’m going to listen a lecture of Doctor Fleming, who is an important scientist.
-And why are you going to listen to him?
-Because I’m a nurse but I’m hoping to study to be a doctor or a surgeon. And I never see him, but I know that he’s very clever, famous and respectable in my job. I want to meet him, it’s important for me. Then, I’m going to do a course in the USA.
-How interesting! Maybe could we see us again? Could I have your phone number? We could go to the restaurant.
-Oh, I’m sorry; I don’t think it will be possible. However, it was an interesting meeting. Goodbye!
-Instead of say “goodbye” you should say “see you later”. I’m the scientist John Fleming, and I’m going to give a lecture.

[JRB]

Bonjour,

myrianis3, le 02 octobre 2011 - 11:01, dit :

Voilà, on a dû inventer un dialogue pour deux personnes qui se rencontrent dans un train. Voici le mien et merci pour toute correction =)

-Sorry, is anyone sitting here?
-No, you can sit down. Are you going all the way to Paris?
-Yes, I am and what about you? Have you ever been to Paris?
-Me too. Yes, I am too. And no, it’s been the first time.
-I have been there several times. I travel a lot. For example, I have just got back to from China. However, it’s the most awful country I’ve never visited. I prefer European Countries. And where do you come from?
-I come from China… and you? You are American, aren’t you?
-Oh, sorry…Yes, I’m. How did you guess?
-It’s because you have a little accent.
-Oh, I never realized it. Then… you come from China but how and why do you speak English?
-Oh, it’s complicated. In fact, I ran away from my country 10 years ago because the life there was very difficult. However, I like my country.
-How terrible. Have you got the time please?
-Yes, I have. It’s practically five o’clock. We should arrive soon. (I hope)
-Then, are you married? Have you got children?
-No, I’m single and I don’t have any children, because I work a lot and for me, it isn’t very important now, and you?
-I don’t have any children and I’m looking for the good right person. I got married but…
-What? You got divorced I presume.
-No, she died two months ago.
-I am sorry. That’s terrible.
-Never mind, don’t worry. This is the life and anyway, I couldn’t stand her. And what are you going to Paris for?
- To visit my sister and I’m going to listen attend a lecture of by Doctor Fleming who is an important scientist.
-And why are you going to listen to him?
-Because I’m a nurse but I’m hoping to study to become a doctor or a surgeon. And although I have never seen him but I know that he’s very clever, famous and respectable in my job. I want to meet him, it’s important for me. Then, I’m going to do have a course in the USA.
-How interesting! Maybe could we see us each other again? Could I have your phone number, please? We could go to the a restaurant.
-Oh, I’m sorry; I don’t think it will be possible. However, it was an interesting nice meeting you. Goodbye!
-Instead of saying “goodbye” you should say “see you later”. I’m John Fleming, the scientist and I’m going to give a lecture.

Même si je trouve que tu te débrouilles plutôt bien, revois quand même les réponses courtes afin d'éviter les calques du français et les cas d'omission de " the ".
Bonne continuation avec l'anglais.