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[Nova]

Bonjour j'aimerais que ce texte soit vérifié ( pour la grammaire et l'orthographe). Merci d'avance


I'm going to tell you about one of my favorite living famous person Filippo Inzaghi commonly known as ''Pippo'' or as ''the man who was born in the offside position''. When you say his name, you often picture a man close to tears after being caught offside for the 20th time in a match.. What you should picture is a man wheeling away in celebration of scoring another goal. I choose him because I particularly like his style of game and his efficiency in front of the goals:
The stats speak for themselves: 300 Serie A Goals, 68 European goals, he's not one to play with chances. Inzaghi became the first striker to score in all international club competitions open to European teams after his double against Boca Juniors during the FIFA Club World Cup final in 2007. Filippo Inzaghi is currently the second all time most prolific goal scorer in European club competitions with 70 goals (only beaten by Raúl's 73 goals). He is also Milan's top international goal scorer in the club's history with 43 goals.
In fact the first time I saw him was during my childhood and so , now he is rather old( for a soccer player): he is 38. He was never married and never knew paternity but he takes care of his nephew .
I have never seen him but I would like to do that before he retired...

[JRB]

Bonjour,

Simple curiosité, tu prépares une série d'interventions orales ou quoi ?

Nova, le 27 septembre 2011 - 14:20, dit :

Bonjour,

J'aimerais que ce texte soit vérifié ( pour la grammaire et l'orthographe). Merci d'avance.


I'm going to tell you about one of my favorite living famous persons, Filippo Inzaghi commonly known as ''Pippo'' or as ''the man who was born in the offside position''. When you say tell his name, you often picture a man close to tears after being caught offside for the 20th time in a match.. What you should picture is a man wheeling away in celebration of scoring another goal. I chose him because I particularly like his style of game style and his efficiency in front of the goals:
The Stats speak for themselves: 300 Serie A Goals, 68 European goals, he's not one to play with chances. Inzaghi became the first striker to score in all international club competitions open to European teams after his double against Boca Juniors during the FIFA Club World Cup final in 2007. Filippo Inzaghi is currently the second all time most prolific goal scorer in European club competitions with 70 goals (only beaten by Raúl's 73 goals). He is also Milan's top international goal scorer in the club's history with 43 goals.
In fact the first time I saw him was during my childhood and so, now he is rather old ( for a soccer player): he is 38. He was never got married and never nor knew fatherhood / paternity but he takes care of his nephew.
I have never seen him but I would like to do that so before he retires...

- Révise les règles régissant emploi / omission du déterminant " the ", c'est important en Terminale.
- Revois aussi l'emploi du présent dans les subordonnées de temps au futur.

Modifié par JRB, 27 septembre 2011 - 17:43.
Suppression pj

[Nova]

Merci pour ta réponse . En fait notre prof d'anglais nous fait un oral voire deux par semaine en donnant différents thèmes , ensuite il choisit 5-6 élèves ... Voila pourquoi je poste pas mal de textes ces temps ci