Email Of Apologize To A Friend

[Marie-Paule]

Bonjour,

Je souhaite envoyer un email à une amie anglophone. Elle n'a pas vraiment passé de très bonnes fêtes de Pâques. Je suis désolée pour elle.

Voici mon petit texte rapide, merci d'avance de me le corriger:

Parfois je ne sais comment exprimer des sentiments en anglais, je les écrirai en français.

Hi Cathy,

I'm very sorry to wish you a happy Easter while you were attending your mother-in-law's commemoration. I hope all the family is better. I can imagine that you're still distressed and in a highly emotional state. (Je me doute que vous êtes encore bouleversés et sous le coup d'une émotion forte).

At this moment I have been looked after my father-in-law's health. I call him and go to see him pratically every day. He's very anxious but he gets better since a few days. His wife will come with him to his next chemotherapy.

I hope he'll be able to come to a family's party in mid-May.

Today I've thought of you, because a friend has phoned me to have my feelings about Vancouver. She might go there for a lecture. If she went there, it would be next year. The lecture would be about cognitive psychology. So I've sent her my photos of Vancouver and I'll send her my rough guide.

I have to go to gym,

See you my friend,

Say hello to Sid and your daugthers,

Marie-Paule.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir Marie-Paule,

Hi Cathy,

I'm very sorry I wished you a happy Easter while you were attending your mother-in-law's commemoration. I hope all the family are better. I can imagine that you're still distressed and in a highly emotional state.

At this moment I'm looking after my father-in-law's health. I call him and visit him practically every day. He's very anxious but he's been getting better for a few days. His wife will go with him to his next chemotherapy.

I hope he'll be able to come to a family party in mid-May.

Today I've thought of you because a friend has phoned me to have my feelings about Vancouver. She might go there for a lecture. If she went there, it would be next year. The lecture would be about cognitive psychology. So I've sent her my photos of Vancouver and I'll send her my rough guide.

I have to go to the gym,

See you my friend,

Say hello to Sid and your daugthers,

Marie-Paule.

[Jean B]

Bonjour Grand Maître Posteur,