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Bonjour,
Travail fais par mon cousin, auriez vous la bonté de me donner une correction s'il vous plaît.

Merci par avance de votre aide coridalement

Every Tuesday I wake up at 7 am, then I wash up and have lunch. At 7:45 am I go out to go to school. 8:00am it's math class, 9am to 10:05am recess then German class and my last class from 11 to 12 pm is class life. Finally finished in the morning I hurry home and eat my meal with my family 13am I prepare my sports stuff because from 13:30pm to 15:30 I have sport. I go to home I take a shower and then I do my homework and I play ps4 until 6pm because it's dinner time. 8pm I go to my room and go to bed because my day is over.

 

My mom wakes up every Thursday at 6am she makes us breakfeast and then wakes us up so we can go to school at 8am she takes the car to take my brother and sister to school. 9am she goes to the supermarket to do some shopping and then returns around 10am. She cleans up and prepares the meal and sets the table for lunch. At 12am she picks the kids from school and we eat and then around 1:45 pm she takes them to school again and then goes to her physiotherapist because mom has health problems. 16:30 pm she goes to school and goes home. At 5 pm she is in front of the stove and makes a bath and then goes to bed around 8:30pm

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Bonjour,

En quoi exactement consistait le travail du dit cousin et en quelle classe est-il ? :unsure:

Il y a 13 heures, sissou45 a dit :

Bonjour,
Travail faist par mon cousin. Auriez-vous la bonté de me donner une correction s'il vous plaît ?

Merci par avance de votre aide coridialement

Every Tuesday I wake up at 7 am, then I wash up and have lunch breakfast. At 7:45 am I go out to go to school. At 8:00am it's math class, from 9am to 10:05am recess then German class and my last class from 11 to 12 pm is class life. Finally finished in when the morning is over I hurry back home and have lunch/eat my meal with my family. Nouvelle phrase > At 13am 1 pm I prepare my sports stuff because from 131:30pm to 153:30 I have a period of sport. Later I go to home, I take a shower and then I do my homework and I play ps from 4 until 6pm because it's dinner time. At 8pm I go to my room and go to bed because my day is over.

 

My mom wakes up every Thursday at 6am. Nouvelle phrase >  She makes us breakfeast and then wakes us up so we can go to school at 8am. Nouvelle phrase >  She takes gets into the car to take drive my brother and sister to school. At 9am she goes to the supermarket to do some shopping and then returns around 10am. She cleans up and prepares the meal and sets the table for lunch. At 12am she picks the kids from school and we have lunch/eat and then around 1:45 pm she takes them to school again and then goes to her physiotherapist because mom has health problems. At 164:30 pm she goes to school and goes comes back home. At 5 pm she is in front of the stove and makes then she has a bath and (then) goes to bed around 8:30pm.

Revoir :

- l'expression de l'heure avec am/pm <<(l'anglais compte les heures sur 2 x 12)

- les prépositions de temps

- la ponctuation

- la coupure des phrases

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