Compréhension

[leamichEL]

Bonjour , 

Je devrais répondre à les questions suivants de la compréhension ecrite vous pouvez me corriger svp merci. 

 

1° This document is a national media campaing warning 

2 ) it represents the dangers of the internet and can have serious consequences

3) The element that refers to the internet uses is the cursor

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1) Whit  and black colors represent darkness

2) The dark part represents darkness and suspense

3) The message addressed to children and parents is a warning of vigilance on social networks

4) Yes they can face the dangers of internets it is the first ones who will have to be very watchful

5) Parents will have to check their children when they are on the internet and find a way of social activity for their children

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

° This document is an Australian national media campaign warning about the Net dangers. < La réponse est ainsi plus complète.

2 ) it The picture represents the dangers of the internet and can have serious consequences a boy watching a computer screen on which the pointer is set on a Paedophiles link. < Il te fallait faire une brève description générale de l'image.

3) The element that refers to the internet uses is the cursor. OK Personnellement, je tournerais ta phrase comme ceci mais rien ne t'y oblige : The cursor is the element that refers to the Internet uses.

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1) White  and black colors represent darkness. OK

2) The dark part represents darkness and suspense danger, possibly in the guise of the devil. <===> ...peut-être sous la forme du diable. C'est plus une supposition de ma part car ton document scanné manque de netteté.

À l'avenir, veille à appliquer ton bouquin bien à plat sur la vitre  !

3) The message addressed to children and parents is a warning of vigilance on social networks <Tu ne réponds pas à la question posée >  le message s'adresse-t-il aux parents ou aux enfants ? À ton avis ? Tu dois justifier ta réponse.

4) Yes they can face the dangers of internets it is the first ones who will have to be very watchful < Tu n'as pas compris la question qui est > À ton avis, ceux que l'on appelle "les enfants du numérique" sont-ils capables d'affronter seuls les dangers de l'internet ?

5) Parents will have to check their children when they are on browsing the internet and find them a way of social activity for their children. < Même si tu cites le rôle des parents, tu ne l'approfondis pas assez.