Une Toute Petite Question

[harmonie louvet]

Bonjour je voudrais savoir si ma phrase est bonne. La Voici : Mobiles will become hand watches, it will have a double function we can wear it and can surf the net as well. We dont need to bring it where we go. And we don't forget it, thieves could not steal it . Voila c'est tout.

Merci

[Jean B]

Bonjour je voudrais savoir si ma phrase est bonne. La Voici : A mobile phone will become a hand watch. It will have a double function: we can wear it and can surf the net as well. We dont need to bring it where we go. And we don't forget it, thieves could not steal it . Voila c'est tout.

Merci

[Invité tamiya]

Réponse selon moi :

Mobiles will become hand watches, it will have a double function, we can wear it and can surf on the net as well. We dont need to bring it everywhere that we are going and we can not forget it, thieves can not steal it .

Coridalement.

[Jean B]

Réponse selon moi :

Mobiles will become hand watches, it will have a double function, we can wear it and can surf on the net as well.

1° Un pronom singulier ne peut pas remplacer un nom pluriel. Ou bien tu mets tout au pluriel, ou bien tu mets tout au singulier mais pas un panachage des deux. Il faut être logique.

2° Le verbe surf est transitif direct, ce qui signifie qu'il s'emploie SANS préposition.

We dont need to bring it everywhere that we are going go and we cannot forget it, thieves cannot steal it .

Coridalement.