Carpe Diem

[mama00165]

Bonjour,

Voici la consigne de mon exercice: make a presentation on a song, movie extract or poem dealing with Carpe Diem.

J'ai choisis de faire un pargraphe sur un extrait de film.

Par avance, merci de votre aide.

 

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button

 

This movie tells the story of a different man, who don't grow old like everyone peoples. In fact, he was born old, and he was very frail, so he has to stay in his house. But he was very curious ,and he escaped to his house.

Benjamin Burton sees the life of another point of view. He has something unique which is at the same time a burden and an unmentionable gift.

I have chosen this movie because Ihave seen it. It's a good way to give an important message : it says that we have to seize the days in spite of difference, age or disease. Benjamin takes advantage of his life lived upside down to make the most of happiness without worrying about the past or the future. So, the moment Benjamin enjoys life to the fullest, is when his body and his "real" age are in perfect symbiosis ... but Benjamin has always seen the good side of life, and each of his meetings. This movie leads to a real reflection on the life so the principal question is:

Would not the time be a set of relationship and of adventures which takes forward the Man in the progress of his existence?

But it is not only his life that makes him unique, love makes him all the more special. Love is what brings Benjamin and Daisy together, in spite of the difference which separated them, they always found themselves.

Benjamin will die in a young body, but his spirit will be more enriched than ever thanks to his incredible life, which is not so different from ours: he died, and he was born like everyone else.

[Jean B]

 

Bonjour,

il y a 28 minutes, mama00165 a dit :

Bonjour,

Voici la consigne de mon exercice : make a presentation on a song, movie extract or poem dealing with Carpe Diem.

J'ai choisis de faire un paragraphe sur un extrait de film.

Par avance, merci de votre aide.

 

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button

 

This movie tells the story of a different man < pas de virgule devant un mot charnière > who don't < le sujet est au singulier, donc ? grow old like everyone peoples. < comment se dit " tout le monde "  ? C'est un seul mot. In fact, he was born old x and he was < c'est un état permanent = présent very frail, so he has to stay in his house. But he was <idem very curious x and he escapes to from his house. < préposition qui marque la provenance

Benjamin Burton sees the life of < idem another point of view. He has something unique which is at the same time a burden and an unmentionable gift.

I have chosen this movie because I have seen it. It's a good way to give an important message: it says that we have to seize the days in spite of difference, age or disease. Benjamin takes advantage of his life lived upside down to make the most of happiness without worrying about the past or the future. So, the moment Benjamin enjoys life to the fullest x is when his body and his "real" age are in perfect symbiosis ... But Benjamin has always seen the good side of life x and each of his meetings. This movie leads to a real reflection on the life so the principal question is: wouldn't the time be a set of relationship and (of) adventures which takes forward the man in the progress of his existence?

But it is not only his life that makes him unique, love makes him all the more special. Love is what brings Benjamin and Daisy together x in spite of the difference which separated < pourquoi le passé tout à coup ? them, they always found see themselves in each other.

Benjamin will die in a young body x but his spirit will be more enriched than ever thanks to his incredible life x which is not so different from ours: he died, and he was born and died like everyone else. < c'est plutôt cette chronologie là, pas vrai ?

Je te laisse le soin de rectifier ce que j'ai juste balisé en rouge et annoté où les x remplacent un mot superflu donc supprimé.

En effet, il faut te guérir de la mauvaise habitude qui consiste à placer une virgule devant un mot charnière tel qu'un pronom relatif ou une conjonction de coordination, c'est grammaticalement fautif.

Révise également les règles d'emploi/omission du déterminant "the", c'est primordial en anglais.

Bonne continuation.

[mama00165]

merci beaucoup!