Spaces and exchanges

[Fiona766]

bonjour,  veuillez m'excuser de cette demande rapide, j'ai travaillé tard hier soir.Il y a sûrement des fautes que j'ai faites, je pense.. . Merci monsieur, Arthur (voisin de Mme Tassel). Bonne Année également,

Spaces and exchanges

 

I'm going to talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges. The notion of space and exchange mean

the trip or the travel. It can be a good travel like the school trip, touristical trip, economic trip or it

can be a bad travel like migrant trip from disaster, war or many other things. We may ask the

question: How spaces and exchanges can influnced our dailly ?

 

A space and exchange may have a good influenced. In this category, we can talk about a men who

travelle the world on people's generosity. He visited 19 countries. He was a broker and felt

disconnected from the real world. He did this trip to go back to the real waves, to the chore of

human relationship. He said that the true wealth is in our hearts no in our wallets. He met a

homeless (Tony) who shared his pavement. He shared the little he had.

To him smartphones are not social media, they don't really connecting people. He wrote a book after

his trip and with the money he decided to giving back this generosity: he helped Tony and his

relatives to have a flat and go back to school. This trip show that a basic trip can changes the dailly

of many people just with a simply true connect with an other people.

 

 

The space and exchange may have a bad influenced on our dailly. In this category I would like to

talk about the travelling. Travelling has a cost and a price. It takes many energy and make pollution

with noise pollution, air pollution and water pollution. The pollution is maked by fossile fuel

exracted from oil rigs and oil plateforms. Travelling has a high carbon footprint. For example we

can talk about the expansion of the Heathrow airport in London who disturb the ecosystem, destroy

the flora and the landscape with the new infrastructures and buildings like hotels. But this

contrcution already have a economically impact beacause the locals are disturbed and pertubed by

mass tourism. It damage to historicals sites. The locals are evicted from their houses to build new

roads to expend the airports. The construction have a food impact beacause it's bring

overconsumption of local ressources and it make import much products like before to answer needs

and tourists tastes.

 

[Jean B]

 

Bonjour,

Rappel utile : "Rien ne sert de courir, il faut partir à point..."

 

il y a 52 minutes, Fiona766 a dit :

bonjour,  veuillez m'excuser de cette demande rapide, j'ai travaillé tard hier soir.Il y a sûrement des fautes que j'ai faites, je pense.. . Merci monsieur, Arthur (voisin de Mme Tassel). Bonne Année également,

Spaces and exchanges

 

I'm going to talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges. The notion of space and exchange mean includes the trip or the travel. It can be a good travel like the school trip, touristical trip, economic trip or it can be a bad travel like migrant trip from disaster, war or many other things. We may ask the question: How can spaces and exchanges can influnced our everyday life? < revoir la formation interrogative

A space and exchange may have a good influenced. In this category, we can talk about a man who

travelled the world on people's generosity. He visited 19 countries. He was a broker and felt

disconnected from the real world. He did this trip to go back to the real waves, to the chore of

human relationship. He said that the true wealth is in our hearts not in our wallets. He met a

homeless person (Tony) who shared his pavement. He shared the little he had.

To him smartphones are not social media, they don't really connecting people. He wrote a book after

his trip and with the money he decided to giving give back this generosity: he helped Tony and his

relatives to have a flat and go back to school. This trip shows that a basic trip can changes the everyday life of many people just with a simply true connection with an other people. < Bravo pour cette accumulation de fautes énormes en si peu d'espace !

The space and exchange may have a bad influenced < encore ! on our dailly. < et encore ! In this category I would like to talk about the travelling. Travelling has a cost and a price. It takes many much energy and makes pollution with noise pollution, air pollution and water pollution. The pollution is maked by fossile fuel extracted from oil rigs and oil plateforms. Travelling has a high carbon footprint. For example we can talk about the expansion of the Heathrow airport in London who disturb the ecosystem, destroy the flora and the landscape with the new infrastructures and buildings like hotels. < Quelle est la terminaison d'un verbe au présent simple dont le sujet est singulier ? Revois tes cours de Sixième du collège !  But this contrcution already have a economically impact beacause the locals are disturbed and pertubed by mass tourism. It damage to historicals sites. The locals are evicted from their houses to build new roads to expend the airports. The construction have a food impact beacause it's bring overconsumption of local ressources and it make import much products like before to answer needs and tourists tastes.

 

Cette seconde et dernière partie est un grand n'importe quoi, indigne en tous cas d'un élève moyen de Première ou Terminale.

 Rappels  de quelques notions de grammaire de base :

- to + BV

- auxiliaire/modal + BV

- forme interrogative : auxiliaire/modal + sujet + BV

En priorité absolue, revois les règles d'emploi/omission du déterminant "the", ce ne sera pas superflu. Lien ci-dessous :

The.doc

[Fiona766]

bonjour Monsieur,

Tout d'abord je vous remercie pour votre correction si rapide. Ne croyez pas  que j'ai fait mon travail au dernier moment. Beaucoup de DS, de devoirs, j'ai trois langues vivantes.. J'ai songé à prendre des cours d'anglais. J'ai 10 de moyenne, vous avez tout de suite vu que j'étais moyen.

Je reviendrai vers le forum qui va m'aider beaucoup pour cette année de baccalauréat.

Bonne journée, Arthur.

[Jean B]

Puisque l'anglais semble être ton talon d'Achille, inscris toi sur anglaisfacile.com pour y travailler assidûment tous tes points faibles.

Ce site est une véritable mine qu'il faut absolument exploiter sans plus tarder.

Bon courage, bon travail et bons progrès.

[kadaaaaaj]

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[Jean B]

Il y a 4 heures, kadaaaaaj a dit :

Sinon tu peux aussi visiter traduireenanglais.fr, ils t'aideront très bien !

Sauf que ce site me paraît des plus suspects, pour ne pas en dire davantage !