meofanny Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 Bonjour j'ai un travail en anglais à rendre pour la rentrée et j'aimerai m'assurer que ce j'ai fais est bien ou non. Merci d'avance la question est: Write about your personal hero or a myth that you believe in. Make sure to answer to these questions in your development: who is he ? / Why did you choose him ? / What makes him a hero ? / what is extraodinary about him ? The notion of hero have changed since the centuries. So, the question we may asked is : what's an hero nowadays ? So if I had to choose a hero or a myth i believe in I'll based myself on the fact that an hero is distinguished by his achievements, messages or because he do courageous things, fight for something or they want to serve others. That's why my choose fall on Nelson Mandela. Indeed, he managed to do his fight against the segregation and for black liberty a model to follow which made him a hero In fact, Nelson Mandela must be considered as a hero because from an early age he fought against inequalities: apartheid and segregation that discriminated against black skin in all areas of daily life. Also, he has distinguished himself by his actions, by his exceptional merits. Courage, determination were part of his principles to make the world a better place. Otherwise, a hero is for me a person who make people react about what they have and what they could have if they follow him. It's indeed what happed with Nelson mandela. Besides, at that time black skin people did not have the right to fight, to express themselves and they were not protected by laws. So Nelson Mandela spent 27 years in prison and have sacrificed part of his life to help black skin people have rights and above all to become equal. Thanks to his sacrifices he succeeded in eliminating racial segregation and apartheid. Furthemore, in my opinion a person who make change the course of history by his own must be considered as a hero. So thanks to Nelson Mandela, people with black skins do not suffer discrimination as before, they are free to live, to work, to study, to be treated like any other people of white skin It's why he may represent a model, an ideal man. And nobody can blame his comportment. So he is a hero Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 Bonjour, Prends bien en compte toutes mes annotations pour corriger tes fautes dont certaines sont carrément monstrueuses. Sans plus tarder, révise les bases qui te font défaut actuellement car il sera trop tard en juin prochain. Si tu as encore des doutes après ça, n’hésite pas à revenir poster le fruit de tes cogitations. Bonjour j'ai un travail en anglais à rendre pour la rentrée et j'aimerais < conditionnel m'assurer que ce j'ai fait < devient faite au féminin est bien ou non. Merci d'avance. la question est: Write about your personal hero or a myth that you believe in. Make sure to answer to these questions in your development: who is he? / Why did you choose him? / What makes him a hero? / what is extraordinary about him? The notion of hero have 1 changed since 2 the centuries. So, the question we may asked 3 is: what's an 4 hero nowadays? So if I had to choose a hero or a myth i 5 believe in I'll based 6 myself on the fact that an 4 hero is distinguished by his achievements, messages or because he do 1 courageous things, fight 1 for something or they want 7 to serve others. 1 sujet au singulier = verbe au singulier – quelle est la terminaison du présent simple lorsque le sujet est une 3e personne du singulier ? 2 over 3 un modal est obligatoirement suivi d’une base verbale 4 dans quels cas emploie-t-on « a » et « an » ? 5 majuscule ! 6 conditionnel = would + base verbale 7 pourquoi ce pluriel tout à coup ? Tu as probablement mal repiqué ça. That's why my choose 8 fall 9 on Nelson Mandela. Indeed, he managed to do his fight against the segregation and for black liberty a model to follow which made him a hero 8 ouvre ton dictionnaire pour y chercher la forme nominale 9 prétérit irrégulier In fact, Nelson Mandela must be considered as a hero because from an early age he fought against inequalities: apartheid and segregation that discriminated against blacks skin in all areas of daily life. Also, he has distinguished himself by his actions, by his exceptional merits. Courage, determination were part of his principles to make the world a better place. Otherwise, a hero is for me a person who make 1 people react about what they have and what they could have if they follow him. It's indeed what happed with Nelson mandela. Besides, at that time black skin people did not have the right to fight, to express themselves and they were not protected by laws. So Nelson Mandela spent 27 years in prison and have sacrificed part of his life to help black skin people have rights and above all to become equal. Thanks to his sacrifices he succeeded in eliminating racial segregation and apartheid. Rappel : le prétérit doit être employé toutes les fois qu’on rapporte un évènement passé, terminé, daté, sans lien avec le présent. Furthermore, in my opinion a person who make change 1 encore ! the course of history by his own must be considered as a hero. So thanks to Nelson Mandela, people with black skins do not suffer discrimination as before, they are free to live, to work, to study, to be treated like any other people of white skin It's why he may represent a model, an ideal man. And nobody can blame his comportment/behaviour. So he is a hero Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
meofanny Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 Auteur Signaler Share Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 Bonjour, j'ai pris en compte toutes vos corrections pensez vous que les erreurs ont bien été corrigé ? Merci encore The notion of hero has changed over the centuries. So, the question we may ask is : what's a hero nowadays ? So if I had to choose a hero or a myth I believe in I'll base myself on the fact that a hero is distinguished by his achievements, messages or because he does courageous things, fights for something or he want to serve others. That's why my chose fell on Nelson Mandela. Indeed, he managed to do his fight against segregation and for black liberty a model to follow which made him a hero In fact, Nelson Mandela must be considered as a hero because from an early age he fought against inequalities: apartheid and segregation that discriminated against blacks in all areas of daily life. Also, he distinguished himself by his actions, by his exceptional merits. Courage, determination were part of his principles to make the world a better place. Otherwise, a hero is for me a person who makes people react about what they have and what they could have if they follow him. It's indeed what happened with Nelson Mandela. Besides, at that time blacks people did not have the right to fight, to express themselves and they were not protected by laws. So Nelson Mandela spent 27 years in prison and sacrificed part of his life to help black skin people have rights and above all to become equal. Thanks to his sacrifices he succeeded in eliminating racial segregation and apartheid. Furthermore, in my opinion a person who makes change the course of history by his own must be considered as a hero. So thanks to Nelson Mandela, people with black skins do not suffer discrimination as before, they are free to live, to work, to study, to be treated like any other people of white skin It's why he may represent a model, an ideal man. And nobody can blame his behaviour . So he is a hero. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 5 janvier 2018 Il y a 2 heures, meofanny a dit : Bonjour, j'ai pris en compte toutes vos corrections pensez vous que les erreurs ont bien été corrigées ? Non, pas toutes. Merci encore The notion of hero has changed over the centuries. So, the question we may ask is : what's a hero nowadays ? So if I had to choose a hero or a myth I believe in I would base myself on the fact that a hero is distinguished by his achievements, messages or because he does courageous things, fights for something or he want to serve others. That's why my chose fell on Nelson Mandela. Indeed, he managed to do his fight against segregation and for black liberty a model to follow which made him a hero In fact, Nelson Mandela must be considered as a hero because from an early age he fought against inequalities: apartheid and segregation that discriminated against blacks in all areas of daily life. Also, he distinguished himself by his actions, by his exceptional merits. Courage, determination were part of his principles to make the world a better place. Otherwise, a hero is for me a person who makes people react about what they have and what they could have if they follow him. It's indeed what happened with Nelson Mandela. Besides, at that time blacks people did not have the right to fight, to express themselves and they were not protected by laws. So Nelson Mandela spent 27 years in prison and sacrificed part of his life to help black skinned people have rights and above all to become equal. Thanks to his sacrifices he succeeded in eliminating racial segregation and apartheid. Furthermore, in my opinion a person who makes the course of history change by his own must be considered as a hero. So thanks to Nelson Mandela, people with black skins do not suffer discrimination as before, they are free to live, to work, to study, to be treated like any other people of white skin It's why he may represent a model, an ideal man. And nobody can blame his behaviour. So he is a hero. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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