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Qualités requises pour être un bon employé

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what qualities are required to be good employee ? (sujet argumentation)

 

The qualities to be a good employees are:

Communicator: Employers prefer to hire employees who have the ability to communicate well and speak with clients and other employees, either in writing or orally. Inappropriate communication between employees can cause a lot of problems for the company.

Disciplined and punctual: Every boss prefers a punctual, disciplined and conscientious employee. Time is money. Coming late to office, taking unnecessary breaks, and leaving earlier than the usual hours cost money to the company. No employer will ever appreciate this.

To polite: Being friendly and approachable will never harm. a good employee greets her co workers a ‘good morning’, says little courteous things like ‘thank you’ and ‘you are welcome’. These things may appear insignificant but can be appreciated by the employer.

 Honesty: A good employee is honest about his work and qualifications.the willing to receive feedback is essential to become a good learner. Honest and humble people, especially when they are in the higher ranks of the company, are greatly appreciated.

Teamwork: De nombreuses entreprises sont composées d'équipes. Toute entreprise nécessite un effort d'équipe efficace. Quelqu'un qui est organisé et qui assure le bon fonctionnement d'une équipe est un employé qui est sérieux et appliqué.

 Helping others: everyone appreciates a helping hand every now and then. Do not hesitate in helping out others. This make the person establish friendly relations with the coworkers and keeps the office running smoothly which in turn is appreciated by the employers.

Adapt to any situation: Employees who know how to adjust themselves to new environment, willing to learn new things and perform their best in changes are likely to be the best performers in any organization.


 

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Good afternoon,

What qualities are required to be good employees? (sujet argumentation)

The qualities to be a good employee are < Ta formulation est correcte mais scolaire. Puisque ses qualités sont exigées, il me semble logique d’employer un modal qui exprime l’obligation (venant du locuteur) c'est-à-dire must.

NB :  employee peut faire référence à la fois au masculin et au féminin.

C’est pourquoi le pluriel présente l’avantage d’éviter l’emploi des pronoms singulier he/she et rien ne s’y oppose dans ton texte. J’ai donc (insidieusement :-P) ajouté un -s partout où nécessaire et suffisant (comme on disait de mon temps en labo de physique-chimie ! :rolleyes:) et modifié les accords verbaux en conséquence.

Good employees must

- be communicators: employers prefer to hire employees who have the ability to communicate well and speak with clients and other employees, either in writing or orally. Inappropriate communication between employees can cause/bring about a lot of problems for to the company.

- be disciplined and punctual: every boss prefers punctual, disciplined and conscientious employees. Time is money. Coming late to office, taking unnecessary breaks and leaving earlier than the usual hours cost money to the company money. No employer will ever appreciate this.

- be polite: being friendly and approachable will never harm. Good employees greet their coworkers with a ‘good morning’, say little courteous things like ‘thank you’ and ‘you are welcome’. These things may appear insignificant but can be appreciated by the employer.

- be honest: good employees are honest about their work and qualifications. The willing to receive feedback is essential to become a good learner. Honest and humble people, especially when they are in the higher ranks of the company, are greatly appreciated.

- be able to do teamwork: Et alors ? En panne ou simples oublis ? > De nombreuses entreprises sont composées d'équipes. A lot of companies work in teams. Toute entreprise nécessite un effort d'équipe efficace. An efficient teamwork will benefit any company. Quelqu'un qui est organisé et qui assure le bon fonctionnement d'une équipe est un employé qui est sérieux et appliqué. Well-organized persons who are well fitted to do teamwork are serious and industrious employees.  

- help others: everyone appreciates a helping hand every now and then. Do not hesitate in helping out to help others out. This makes the person establish friendly relations with the coworkers and keeps the office running smoothly, which in turn is appreciated by the employers. < virgule devant le which = ce qui

- adapt to any situation: employees who know how to adjust themselves to a new environment, willing to learn new things and perform their best in exchange are likely to be the best performers in any organization.

 

Pour la note/20, désormais je botte en touche.

Bonne continuation.

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