Summarize the article

[Ch00Ch00]

Bonjour à tous, 

Je dois faire un résumé d'un article de journal, je dois faire 150 mots. 

Voici ce que j'ai fait:

Planet’s satellites offer customers a new world view every day

            The polar satellite launch vehicle built by the indian space research organisation, threw on the space on February 15^th 2017.

The Earth has 104 satellites in the orbitz to take on detailed pictures of the planet every single day. The world ‘’doves’’ is referring to the satellites. The first one launched five years  ago, it helps to take about 3000 square kilometres a day, the newest one can take over 2.5m square kilometres a day.

“ The expanded fleet of satellites’’ will send over three terabytes of data a day to around thirty receiver stations, company clients can easily accessed to data stock in the ‘’cloud’’.

In term of business, satellites do not make much money. In 2004, Google bought SkySat for 500 millions dollars then a few weeks Google sold the Skysat to Planet which is not the only company to produce big data from satellites.

Qu'en pensez vous ?

Merci d'avance,   

 

 

Planet’s satellites offer customers a new world view every day.pdf

[Jean B]

 

Bonjour,

Il y a 16 heures, Ch00Ch00 a dit :

Bonjour à tous, 

Je dois faire un résumé d'un article de journal, je dois faire 150 mots. 

Voici ce que j'ai fait:

Planet’s satellites offer customers a new world view every day

            The Polar Satellite Launch Vehicle built by the Indian Space Research Organisation, threw on the was  launched into space on February 15^th 2017. <Résumer un texte ne consiste pas à en supprimer les majuscules, rien à voir !

The Earth has 104 satellites in the orbitz to take on detailed pictures of the planet every single day. The world ‘’doves’’ is referring to the satellites. The first one was launched five years  ago, it helps to take pictures of about 3000 square kilometres a day, the newest one can take over 2.5m square kilometres a day.

“ The expanded fleet of satellites’’ will send over three terabytes of data a day to around thirty receiver stations, company clients can easily accessed to data stock in the ‘’cloud’’.

In term of business, satellites do not make much money. In 2014, Google bought SkySat for 500 millions dollars then a few weeks ago Google sold the Skysat to Planet which is not the only company to produce big data from satellites.

Qu'en pensez vous ? < Sans vouloir t'offenser, je pense que tu donnes l'impression d'ignorer en quoi consiste exactement un résumé de texte.

Tu trouveras 2 exemples de méthodologie dans les 2 pièces jointes ci-dessous.

Merci d'avance,  < You're welcome.

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[Ch00Ch00]

Merci beaucoup pour les deux documents