lili33331 Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 Bonjour, j'ai un résumé à faire sur un livre qui s'appelle "Wuthering Heights" pourriez vous m'aider ? “Wuthering Heights” is a story of a men, Mr Lockwood, come to stay at “Thrushcross Grange”. One day, while he came to “Wuthering Heights”, he had to stay because of the weather and a strange thing happened(he believed to see a ghost) and he discovered a diary held by a little girl named Catherine. Came back to “Thrushcross Grange”, he asked Mrs Dean, a domestic who had worked at “Wuthering Heights”, in order to learn more. She told him the story of a family, including a father, who brought a little boy, come back of a journey. The little boy wasn’t very educated, without parents. But very quickly, Catherine, the youngest daughter of Mr Earnshaw, began to appreciate him and established a link with him. He became her “playmate”. However, Hindley, Catherine’s brother, didn’t accept this boy and didn’t look favorably this link. After the death of Mr and Mrs Earnshaw, Hindley became the master of the house with his wife Frances, and didn’t save Catherine and Heathcliff, Catherine met a boy who lived at “Thrushcross Grange”: Edgar Linton. In the meantime, Mr Hindley had a boy named Hareton but Frances died. Mr Hindley didn’t nurse his daughter and became an horrible human, alcoholic. Hareton was raised by Mrs Dean his early years. Very quickly, Catherine felt in love with Edgar and while Heathcliff had disappeared, Catherine and Edgar got married. Catherine was in good relation with Isabelle, Edgar’s sister, and Edgar. One day, Heathcliff came back to”Thrushcross Grange”. He had made fortune. He learnt that Catherine and Edgar were married and we learnt that Heathcliff and Catherine were in love since they were young. But, probably by revenge, Heathcliff decided to seduce Isabelle. Isabelle and Catherine quarreled about it and Heathcliff and Isabelle escaped to get married. Because of this story, Edgar and Catherine quarreled and Catherine got sick. When Edgar learnt this, he nursed Catherine but she died when she gave birth of Catherine. We learnt that(while Isabelle and Heathcliff lived at “Wuthering Heights”)Isabelle, having to live with Heathcliff who became unlivable, decided to leave “Wuthering Heights” and gave birth of a boy named Linton. Catherine Linton was raised in happiness with her father and Mrs Dean. Hareton was raised by Heathcliff, because, when Hindley died, Heathcliff decided to raise Hareton by threatening Edgar that if he wanted to raise Hareton, Heathcliff went to Isabelle and took her son. When Isabelle died, Linton went to “Thrushcross Grange”, but during a escapade Catherine went to “Wuthering Heights” by mistake and she learnt to Heatcliff that Linton was in “Thrushcross Grange”, so Heathcliff decided to go at “Thrushcross Grange” and to take his son. Catherine was really unhappy because of the leaving of her cousin so she decided to contact him, first with letters, then with secrets visits, and she left in love with him. Heathcliff had prepared a plan, for revenge, to hurt Mr Linton, but especially to return of lands, and to do this, he wanted to marry Catherine and Linton. Mr Linton, got sick, looked favorably this marriage because he was going to die and he didn’t want to let his daughter alone. Catherine and Linton got married but Heathcliff wasn’t kind with them. Mr Linton died. Linton was a gentle soul and got sick. Heathcliff’s plan wasn’t good because Mr Linton did a testament to prevent his plans. Linton died. Mr Lockwood, who heard this entire story, decided to live “Thrushcross Grange” to go on London. And some time later, he returned to “Thrushcross Grange” and Mrs ean wasn’t at “Thrushcross Grange”So he went to “Wuthering Heights” and he learnt what happened. Merci d'avance Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 Bonjour, J'ignore si ton professeur t'a donné une méthodologie du résumé car c'est un exercice plutôt difficile, qui plus est pour un roman entier, j'espère qu'il/elle l'a fait. Je te reprocherai d'avoir tout écrit "au kilomètre" sans faire aucun paragraphe, ce qui donne une désagréable impression de fouillis dans lequel "une chatte ne retrouverait pas ses petits", comme dit l'expression populaire. Ci après, tu trouveras 2 liens vers 2 exemples de résumés du roman ainsi qu'une fiche méthode. Sans tout bouleverser de ton travail, essaie de l'organiser mieux en t'inspirant de la fiche méthode et des 2 exemples. Au plaisir de te re-lire. Liens.docx Fiche méthode.doc Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
lili33331 Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 Auteur Signaler Share Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 Bonjour, j'ai revu mon résumé du livre "Wuthering Heights" et j'ai essayé de le réorganisé en paragraphes, pourriez vous me dire si c'est mieux ? “Wuthering Heights” is a story of a men, Mr Lockwood, come to stay at “Thrushcross Grange”. One day, while he came to “Wuthering Heights”, he had to stay because of the weather and a strange thing happened(he believed to see a ghost) and he discovered a diary held by a little girl named Catherine. Came back to “Thrushcross Grange”, he asked Mrs Dean, a domestic who had worked at “Wuthering Heights”, in order to learn more. She told him the story of a family, including a father, who brought a little boy, come back of a journey. The little boy wasn’t very educated, without parents. But very quickly, Catherine, the youngest daughter of Mr Earnshaw, began to appreciate him and established a link with him. He became her “playmate”. However, Hindley, Catherine’s brother, didn’t accept this boy and didn’t look favorably this link. After the death of Mr and Mrs Earnshaw, Hindley became the master of the house with his wife Frances, and didn’t save Catherine and Heathcliff. Catherine met a boy who lived at “Thrushcross Grange”: Edgar Linton. Catherine felt in love with Edgar and while Heathcliff had disappeared, Catherine and Edgar got married. In the meantime, Mr Hindley had a boy named Hareton but Frances died. Mr Hindley didn’t nurse his daughter and became an horrible human, alcoholic. Hareton was raised by Mrs Dean his early years. One day, Heathcliff came back to”Thrushcross Grange”. He had made fortune. We learnt that Heathcliff and Catherine were in love since they were young. But, probably by revenge, Heathcliff decided to seduce Isabelle. Isabelle and Catherine quarreled about it and Heathcliff and Isabelle escaped to get married. Because of this story, Edgar and Catherine quarreled and Catherine got sick. When Edgar learnt this, he nursed Catherine but she died when she gave birth of a little girl: Catherine. We learnt that(while Isabelle and Heathcliff lived at “Wuthering Heights”)Isabelle, having to live with Heathcliff who became unlivable, decided to leave “Wuthering Heights” and gave birth of a boy named Linton. Catherine Linton was raised in happiness with her father and Mrs Dean. Hareton was raised by Heathcliff when Hindley died. When Isabelle died, Linton went to “Thrushcross Grange”, but Heathcliff learnt this and took his son. Catherine was really unhappy because of the leaving of her cousin so she decided to contact him, first with letters, then with secrets visits, and she left in love with him. Heathcliff had prepared a plan, for revenge, to hurt Mr Linton, but especially to return of lands, and to do this, he wanted to marry Catherine and Linton. Mr Linton, got sick, looked favorably this marriage because he was going to die and he didn’t want to let his daughter alone. Catherine and Linton got married but Heathcliff wasn’t kind with them. Mr Linton died. Linton was a gentle soul and got sick. Heathcliff’s plan wasn’t good because Mr Linton did a testament to prevent his plans. Linton died of a disease. Mr Lockwood, who heard this entire story, decided to live “Thrushcross Grange” to go on London. And some time later, he returned to “Thrushcross Grange” and Mrs Dean wasn’t at the Grange. So he went to “Wuthering Heights” and he learnt what happened: Heathcliff died of a mysterious disease, he seemed to become crazy. Catherine and Hareton, eventually appreciated and felt in love. Merci d'avance Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 3 mars 2017 Merci de poster à la suite du sujet déjà ouvert puisqu'il s'agit du même. En conséquence de quoi j'ai fusionné tes 2 messages. “Wuthering Heights” is a the story of a man, Mr Lockwood who has come to stay at “Thrushcross Grange”. << 1 man vs 2 men, l'aurais-tu oublié ? One day, while he came to “Wuthering Heights”, he had to stay at Wuthering Heights because of the weather and a strange thing happened (he believed to see he saw/had seen a ghost) and he discovered a diary held by a little girl named Catherine. Came Back to “Thrushcross Grange”, he asked Mrs Dean, a domestic servant who had worked at “Wuthering Heights”, in order to learn more. She told him the story of a family, including a father who brought a little boy, come back of on his return from a journey. The little boy wasn’t very educated, without parents he was an orphan. But very quickly, Catherine, the youngest daughter of Mr Earnshaw, began to appreciate him and established a link bonds of friendship with him. He became her “playmate”. However, Hindley, Catherine’s brother, didn’t accept this boy and didn’t look favorably like this link bond. After the death of Mr and Mrs Earnshaw, Hindley became the master of the house with his wife Frances and didn’t save Catherine and Heathcliff. << Je ne comprends pas ce que tu as voulu dire. Catherine met a boy who lived at “Thrushcross Grange”: Edgar Linton. Catherine felt fell in love with Edgar and while Heathcliff had disappeared, Catherine and Edgar got married. << fall/fell/fallen n'a absolument rien à voir avec feel/felt/felt. Tu DOIS connaître tous les verbes irréguliers sans la moindre erreur, c'est capital. In the meantime, Mr Hindley had a boy named Hareton but Frances died. Mr Hindley didn’t nurse his daughter and became an horrible human, an alcoholic. Hareton was raised by Mrs Dean during his early years. << Rappel : "a" devant un mot commençant par un son-consonne vs "an" devant un mot commençant par un son-voyelle ou un "h" muet. Aide-toi du dictionnaire quand tu hésites. One day, Heathcliff came back to”Thrushcross Grange”. He had made his fortune. We learnt that Heathcliff and Catherine were had been in love since they were young their childhood. But, probably by out of mere revenge, Heathcliff decided to seduce Isabelle. Isabelle and Catherine quarrelled about it and Heathcliff and Isabelle escaped to get married. Because of this story, Edgar and Catherine quarrelled and Catherine got sick. When Edgar learnt this, he nursed Catherine but she died when she gave birth of to a little girl: Catherine. We learnt that(while Isabelle and Heathcliff lived at “Wuthering Heights”)Isabelle, having to live with Heathcliff who became unlivable, decided to leave “Wuthering Heights” and gave birth of a boy named Linton. << À reformuler de manière claire. Catherine Linton was raised in happiness with her father and Mrs Dean. Hareton was raised by Heathcliff when Hindley died. When Isabelle died, Linton went to “Thrushcross Grange”, but Heathcliff learnt this and took his son. Catherine was really unhappy because of the leaving of her cousin so she decided to contact him, first with letters, then with secrets visits and she left fell in love with him.<<Les adjectifs sont INVARIABLES ! Heathcliff had prepared a plan, for revenge, to hurt Mr Linton, but especially to return of lands, and to do this, he wanted to marry Catherine and Linton. << À reformuler encore ! Mr Linton got sick, looked favorably considered this marriage favourably because he was going to die and he didn’t want to let leave his daughter alone. Catherine and Linton got married but Heathcliff wasn’t kind with them. Mr Linton died. Linton was a gentle soul and got sick. Heathcliff’s plan wasn’t good because Mr Linton did had made a testament will to prevent thwart his plans. Linton died of a disease. Mr Lockwood who heard this entire story, decided to live leave “Thrushcross Grange” to go on and live in London. << Là encore "leave" et "live" n'ont absolument rien à voir l'un avec l'autre. Sois attentive à ce que tu écris. And some time later he returned to “Thrushcross Grange” and Mrs Dean wasn’t at the Grange. So he went to “Wuthering Heights” and he learnt what happened: Heathcliff died of a mysterious disease, he seemed to become crazy. Catherine and Hareton eventually appreciated and felt << Encore ! fell in love. C'est un peu plus lisible en effet mais je crains que les mânes d'Emily Brontë ne se sentent quelque peu inconfortables s'ils viennent à lire ça. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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