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[Sizzix]

 

Bonjour

J'ai besoin de vous ^^

Demain j'ai un oral d'anglais de 5 minutes sur une pub au choix. J'ai choisi celle ci:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eBPo0t69bi4&ab_channel=mikester851

J'ai commencé mais je ne suis pas du tout sûr de tenir 5 minutes x:

Selon vous,que puis je développer ?Ou rajouter ?

 

This video is a advert for Mercedes Benz E-Klasse,a german brand car.The slogan is “Beauty is nothing without brains”.The target audience is adults who want to buy a car.
This advert shows a young pretty blond woman.who go in the library,she orders a burger,french fries and a milk shake,as if it were in a fast food.The woman of the library pointed out to her that she is in a library.So, the other woman began to whisper his order.it means that beauty is nothing if you're stupid.
As a car, if the car is beautiful in appearance, she must roll and that have technological gadgets.
The stereotype that says that blondes are stupid is used here.
At the end,there is a music calm of piano. And there is the Mercedes car that appears.
I think this pub is really funny and it can influence the customer to buy this car because the car is showcased for this beauty and this modernity.

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Bonjour..

J'ai pu rajouté quelques idées :

 

 

This video is a advert for Mercedes Benz E-Klasse,a german brand car.The slogan is “Beauty is nothing without brains”.The target audience is adults who want to buy a car.

This advert shows a young pretty blond woman.who go in the library,she orders a burger,french fries and a milk shake,as if it were in a fast food.The woman of the library pointed out to her that she is in a library.So, the other woman began to whisper his order.it means that beauty is nothing if you're stupid.

As a car, if the car is beautiful in appearance, she must roll and that have technological gadgets.

The ad is full of stereotype :The stereotype that says that blondes are stupid is used here to support the fact that the woman is silly,  patient librarian woman with curly hair. And the intelligent engineers behind the German Mercedes.

Behind, there are men who read to show that they have understood the utility of the library.This advert compares the woman to a car. It tell us that a car is worth more than this woman because it has beauty and brains.

 

At the end,there is a music calm of piano. And there is the Mercedes car that appears.

I think this pub is really funny and it can influence the customer to buy this car because the car is showcased for this beauty and this modernity or performance,but But I find that too many are used stereotype .

 

 

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

 

This video is an advert for Mercedes Benz E-Klasse, a German brand car. The slogan is “Beauty is nothing without brains”.The target audience is adults who want to buy a car.

This advert shows a young pretty blonde woman who go in the enters a library ,she and orders a burger, French fries and a milk shake as if it were in a fast-food restaurant.The woman of the library pointeds <Tu as commencé au présent, autant continuer. out to her that she is in a library. So the other woman blonde began to whispers his her order again.It means that beauty is nothing if you're stupid.

As a car, if the car is beautiful in appearance, she must roll and that have technological gadgets. <C'est incompréhensible. Qu'as-tu voulu dire ?

The ad is full of stereotypes: the stereotype that says that blondes are stupid is used here to support the fact that the woman blonde is silly,  patient the librarian woman with curly hair is patient and the intelligent engineers behind the German Mercedes car are intelligent.<Sois un peu plus logique dans la construction de ta phrase !

Behind In the background there are men who are reading to show that they have understood the utility usefulness of the library. This advert compares the woman to with a car. It tells us that a car is worth more than this woman because it has beauty and brains.< -s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est singulier. Si tu ne l'écris pas, tu ne le prononceras pas le jour de l'oral et ce sera forcément remarqué.

At In the end, there is a calm music calm of piano.< L'adjectif AVANT le nom ! Il s'agit de l'Adagio du Concerto pour piano N° 21 de Wolfgang-Amadeus Mozart. And there is the Mercedes car that appears.

I think this pub (*) advert is really funny and it can influence the customer to buy this car because the car is showcased for this its beauty and this its modernity or performance but But I find think that too many stereotypes are used.

(*) Même si les pubs anglais font aussi de la pub, on y va surtout pour boire un coup... ou deux.

Bonne chance pour ton oral.

 

 

[Sizzix]

Je te remercie infiniment pour ta réponse

=> As a car, if the car is beautiful in appearance, she must roll and that have technological gadgets. <C'est incompréhensible. Qu'as-tu voulu dire ?

En faite,je vais de me rendre compte que ce n'était pas non plus français.^^ Je veux dire que La voiture doit pas seulement être belle, mais elle doit aussi rouler et avoir des gadgets modernes.

Merci beaucoup

[Jean B]

En faite, je vais viens de me rendre compte que ce n'était pas non plus français.^^ Je veux dire que la voiture ne doit pas seulement être belle, mais elle doit aussi rouler <(c'est évident ! ) et avoir des gadgets modernes.

Suggestion :>>> Not only has the car to be beautiful but it also has to go/run and be fitted up with modern devices.

[Sizzix]

Merci Beaucoup ! J'ai mon oral dans une heure ^^