Aller au contenu

Correction D'un Texte


Matrixk

Messages recommandés

Pourriez vous vérifier les éventuelles fautes s'il vous plait ?

C'est pour un travail de vacances, je vous remerci à l'avance smile.png

Chicago, the future host of the Olympics.

Chicago could be the future host of the Olympics in either 2024 or 2028. It has many infrastructures that's why it's going to be a good choice for the future Olympics.

But there are other reasons. For example, that's safe because there are policemen and they keep an eye on the city.

There are many hotels and that's great for tourists. My friend Myke is an accountant. He said me that Chicago has a good financial plan and it has a good economy.

What is more, there are sports centres. Consequently, Chicago's the best choice and people can have perfect moments there.

Lien vers le commentaire
Partager sur d’autres sites

  • 2 semaines plus tard...
  • E-Bahut

Pourriez vous vérifier les éventuelles fautes s'il vous plait ?

C'est pour un travail de vacances, je vous remercie à l'avance smile.png

Chicago, the future host of the Olympics.

Chicago could be the future host of the Olympics in either in 2024 or 2028. It has many infrastructures that's why it's going to would be a good choice for the future Olympics.

But there are other reasons. For example, that's (what is safe?) safe because there are policemen (aren't there any in the other towns?) and they keep an eye on the city.

There are many hotels and that's great for tourists. My friend Myke is an accountant. He said told me that Chicago has a good financial plan and it has a good economy.

What is more, there are sports centres. Consequently, Chicago's the best choice and people can could have perfect moments there.

Lien vers le commentaire
Partager sur d’autres sites

Archivé

Ce sujet est désormais archivé et ne peut plus recevoir de nouvelles réponses.

×
×
  • Créer...
spam filtering
spam filtering