Ecrit : L'hotel Le Plus Chère Au Monde

[myrianis3]

Je dois écrire une lettre parlant de la suite d'hotel la plus chère au monde, la voici et merci pour toute correction car l'anglais, c'est pas trop mon fort

Dear James,

I won a competition one month ago, and the first prize is a stay at the Royal Towers of Atlantis on Paradise Island in the Bahamas for a week! When I received the letter, I couldn’t believe it. So, I’m staying in the Bridge Suite, the most expensive hotel suite in the world. That’s incredible, and I wanted absolutely to tell you about it.

First of all, the weather is very nice. It’s hot but there is a bit of wind that cools you down. It’s also sunny and there is about 28 degrees. Then, this hotel it’s the paradise for the greedy : there are all that you want and all is really delicious. I also have my own bar area, with a barman who is available if I don’t want to serve myself.

Additionally, the hotel is very luxurious. It was built for celebrity, royalty and very rich people. The hotel include a lot of activities very nice. Indeed, you can swim in one of many swimming pools, or in the Atlantic Ocean. You can go sailing, and practice many water sports, like jet-ski.

Then, The Bridge Suite is located on top of a bridge that connects the two Royal Towers buildings, so it overlooks the entire resort and the view is spectacular. However, there are eighteen rooms with five showers and four toilets! I think that is a bit silly, because it’s really not necessary. In fact, although live like a celebrity is a very nice experience, It’s also choking because everything here is superficial, like gold-gilt bar stools. You don’t must break anything! Actually, the cheapest item in the suite cost $6000. It’s a little obscene when you think that there are people die of hunger while other spend $20000 for one night in a hotel.

Despite everything, I want to benefit from the stay. I’m planning to go sightseeing, and visiting the country with a guide. I’m also hoping to going diving. I hope tan but I’m lucky because I tan easily. Finally, I want to play on the grand piano and try the stereo system. I feel that would be great. I’m stopping now, I have to go to dinner.

Write soon and take care,

Kisses,

Marie

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Je dois écrire une lettre parlant de la suite d'hotel la plus chère au monde. La voici et merci pour toute correction car l'anglais, c'est pas trop mon fort.

Dear James,

I won a competition one month ago, and the first prize is a stay at the Royal Towers of Atlantis on Paradise Island in the Bahamas for a week! When I received the letter, I couldn’t believe it. So, I’m staying in the Bridge Suite, the most expensive hotel suite in the world. That’s incredible, and I absolutely wanted absolutely to tell you about it.

[myrianis3]

si, mais nous avions un texte-source! pour le reste, j'ai tout inventé moi-même... merci

[myrianis3]

et sinon, je ne saisis pas si tes remarques sont ironiques... mais pour information, je me sers bien du dictionnaire, et je voulais dire que cet étalage de luxe pouvait être étouffant.... enfin merci pour tes corrections =)