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[ArthurBd]

Bonjour,

Je voulais savoir si quelqu'un pouvais me corriger mes fautes sur le texte ci-dessous :

Merci d'avance!

Firstly, I can explain you quickly the rules of this sport. Then, I will speak about Irish Rugby in Ireland and in Europe. Finally, I will speak about the flag, the hymn and the stadium of the national team.

Two teams compete for two halves of 40 minutes. Each team of 15 players on the field. The goal is to get more points than his opponent at the end of the match. We can score points by flattening the ball past the posts. This is equivalent to 5 points. Otherwise you can pass the ball between the posts, which is equivalent to 3 points.

Rugby has been played in Ireland since at least 1854 when the first club, at Trinity College in Dublin, was established. The governing body, the Irish Rugby Football Union (IRFU), was formed in 1874.

The large professional teams in Ireland, essentially one in each of the provinces Munster, Leinster, Ulster and Connaught, primarily concentrate on the Heineken Cup, this is equivalent to Champions League football and the Magners League, which are European competitions, rather than on competitions within Ireland.

Magners League is a championship with teams from Ireland, Scotland, Italy and Wales.

The Rugby Union is a major sport in Ireland. However, it is widely anticipated by the Gaelic sports and football. It is practiced by about environ about 86 500 persons in Ireland.

Rugby has a strong academic tradition. As the most famous rugby school in Ireland is that of Blackrock College in Dublin . Great players of Irish rugby like Brian O'Driscoll, Gordon d’Arcy, Tommy Bowe was at this school when they were young.

In April 1995, Philip Coulter, created a hymn for the Irsh Team : the Ireland's Call. Before, this hymn, the team had two hymn. When they received in Belfast the hymn was God Save the Queen (the national hymn of England) and when they played in Dublin, the hymn was Amhrán na bhFiann (it’s the national hymn of Ireland). But the Federation of Irish Rugby decided to create another hymn to gather the nationalist and the unionist.

When the national team plays, not the national flag like others countries. But the flag which is deployed it’s a flag with the symbols of the four provinces. The federation has decided that because the national team includes Ireland and Northern Ireland.

The national team play in Stadium called Aviva Stadium since 2007. Before, she played in a same place but in another Stadium Lansdowne Road. The federation decided to destroy this Stadium to create another with more places and more design. So, in 2007, Aviva Stadium was born. ArthurBd Petit nouveau Messages: 1 Inscription: 30 Jan 2012, 02:05 Emploi: Etudiant Ville: Dublin

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[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

Je voulais savoir si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger mes fautes sur le texte ci-dessous :

Merci d'avance !

Firstly, I can quickly explain to you quickly what the rules of this sport are. Then, I will speak about Irish Rugby in Ireland and in Europe. Finally, I will speak about the flag, the hymn and the stadium of the national team.

Two teams compete for during two halves of 40 minutes. Each team of 15 players play on the field.

[ArthurBd]

Merci pour cette correction.