La Musique

[myrianis3]

Voilà un oral on anglais pour lundi... malheureusement l'anglais n'est pas trop mon fort, j'espère que vous pourrez m'aider à améliorer =)

When I was a child, I used to listen to Disney’s music and a singer called Alyzée. I remember that my parents offered me a cd for my 5^th birthday. And two years later, I clearly remember going to a concert from her. I went there with my sister, my best friend and my parents and it was a very great memory. However, my earliest memory of music is a lullaby that my mother sang before bedtime. Then, I always wanted to play a musical instrument, and one day, I listened my cousin to play the piano, and from that time, I knew that it was this instrument and no another. So, I learnt the piano for three years and I really liked that. Unfortunately, I had to give up my lessons because my teacher moved to Brussels. At school, we used to have music lessons in first and second year. It was a really nice lesson and I loved it, like drawing classes. I always listen to music while I study, because it helps me concentrate. Then, I listen a lot of sort of music but I don’t made techno and rap.

[myrianis3]

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When I was a child, I used to listen to Disney’s music and a singer called Avril Lavigne. I remember that my parents offered me a cd for my 5^th birthday. And two years later, I clearly remember going to a concert from her. I went there with my sister, my best friend and my parents and it is a very great memory. However, my earliest memory of music is a lullaby that my mother sang before bedtime. As I got older, I’ve learnt to appreciate a lot of kind of music. However, I’m not too keen on techno and rap that irritates me. Then, I always wanted to learn to play a musical instrument, but I didn’t know which to choose, but one day, I listened my cousin to play the piano, and from that time, I knew that it was this instrument and no another. So, I learnt the piano for three years and I really liked it. Unfortunately, I had to give up my lessons because my teacher moved to Brussels. At school, we used to have music lessons in first and second year, and I found it very nice. Then, I always listen to music while I study, because it helps me concentrate.

voilà j'ai essayé de modifier et d'améliorer, mais si vous pouviez m'aider... c'est un oral pr demain merci

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

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When I was a child, I used to listen to Disney’s music and a singer called Avril Lavigne. I remember that my parents offered me a cd for my 5^th birthday. And two years later, I clearly remember going to a concert from by her. I went there with my sister, my best friend and my parents and it is a very great memory. However, my earliest memory of music is a lullaby that my mother sang before bedtime. As I got older, I’ve learnt to appreciate a lot of kinds of music. However, I’m not too keen on techno and rap that irritates me. Then, I always wanted to learn how to play a musical instrument, but I didn’t know which one to choose, but one day, I listened my cousin to playing the piano, and from that time, I knew that it was this instrument and no another. So, I learnt the piano for three years and I really liked it. Unfortunately, I had to give up my lessons because my teacher moved to Brussels. At school, we used to have music lessons in first and second year, and I found it very nice. Then, I always listen to music while I am studying, because it helps me concentrate.

voilà j'ai essayé de modifier et d'améliorer, mais si vous pouviez m'aider... c'est un oral pr demain merci